Poem/Lyrics about getting bullied

[Sam.]

Rule No.1: Feedback - One link of feedback that you have given must be posted in addition to your piece (song, verse, etc) to ensure activity in this section. IF YOU DO NOT DO THIS, YOUR POST WILL BE LOCKED, AND IF YOU REPEATEDLY FAIL TO DO THIS YOU WILL BE BANNED, if you don't like it, get the fuck out bitch. NO EXCEPTIONS
----- new members will not get approved if they dont follow this rule

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=99315

I'm saying this for your own benefit. Do it fast, the MODS are relentless here. Feed someone and use the link to that post in the OP, that's the basic extract from the Rule that I posted.

Peace, homie.

[Sam.]

Fool.

1. Feed this: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162127
2. Your post will yield a link, which you can see in the address bar.
3. Copy that shit.
4. Post it in your OP.
5. Finish.

[Sam.]

No problem, dude.

Amazing stuff right there, bro. It's something(content) that is really personal and interesting. It's polished and seems simple, but deffo not bad. Rhymes are basic, work on making that complex by using deeper Multis. Practice. Everything else was just fine.

[Snakebeast]

I can feel the passion with every line. Pretty damn awesome. Favourite lines:

My songs on Itunes sure yeah you can buy it
What? What do you mean you cant find it?

Though for some reason, I feel like this song could use more swearing. And I REALLY want to hear the audio for this track. A written doesn't do this justice.

[CanadaPure]

Fool.

Don't be an asshole.