SliK - Keep it comin'

[SliK]

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Fuck club-hoppin', I got the C Dub-poppin'-tonight
Rockin'-this-mic I got the nubs-flockin'-to-write
Droppin'-this-white hot rhyme will chomp-'em-alive
Why bother-to-try finish-the-beef?
Cos when you write back you're only mimicking-me
All it took was one drop then in-symmetry
You're all bitchin', itchin' just to stick-it-to-me
Industry-beef, this-is-defeat, get used-to-the-taste
Your future-your-fate, all of which you're losin'-today
I'm Choosin-to-stay-writin', You losers-will-stay-frightened
My day-brightens when you're itchin-for-beef-shit
I'll rip-you-to-pieces like some fuckin' strays-fightin'
You gays-mightn't even know you're about to get played-hard
Want the fame-option, name-droppin to get on my radar
Then when the race-starts you'll be beggin-me-to-stop
But I'll just keep on comin' with everything-I-got


Just practicing different flows and different rhyming. This is just a generic piece, if it was aimed at someone I would have said their name. Keep comin' at me doe

[CrashBand]

Reminiscent of Hopsin. I read it with his voice and flow.

Take that how you want it, lol.

[Just Silver]

this was a nice paced flow didnt understand so many hyphens

but otherwise it was short and packed with multis

i need to redeem myself lol and with all this shit in my life i need to drop a cw piece as well

couldve been longer otherwise its a good drop

[Just Silver]

this was a nice paced flow didnt understand so many hyphens

He's showing his multis that's why.

oh i see lol thats easier to understand

[SliK]

Reminiscent of Hopsin. I read it with his voice and flow.

Take that how you want it, lol.

A year ago I'd have liked that, but Hopsin's rhymes don't really feel natural. Like he's phrasing things for the sake of rhyming them, which I guess I did here a bit, which I assume is what you're getting at?

[SajN]

The feed in your link isn't good enough to use as LOF.


PM Spyder, Geno or Menzo when you have a better one.