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Wanted For: Feed

Postby J.R. » Jul 28th, '13, 06:58

1.) Sorry for Disappearing & there is no beat.

2.) Take the message seriously, and enjoy.

3.) Still no vet status? XD jk

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They call me the end result of angst and hate,
Believe me, eedee, you won’t receive feed on any day you wait,
The tape is great, but there’s no effort made,
Artist are left breathless in a quest for praise.
“But J, it’s just verses typed over a beat.”
Curses you don’t peak behind the curtain and see,
Please, work is work and passion is rapping,
It’s worse cause for some, this HAS to happen.
But they’re trapped and without your feed,
These emcee’s cant move on from the computer seat.
See though, I gotta express, I’m guilty too.
Now I’m blessed with something I never had the will to do.
Still it’s true, I left some of you without feed.
And I don’t blame you for letting that reflect poorly on me.
But if we can all agree, I think we can add more feed.
Cause if this section dies, I know how pissy I am sure to be.
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