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Buzzed Hologram

Postby Just Silver » Aug 21st, '13, 02:24

feed-pain and rolly takeover *cant copy n paste



Watermelon wasted alcohol no chasin, thief in the matrix
Blacked out with many confrontations ,all them waitin
For my rest in peace destination, best of beats i make statements
Take a player example the game is more than a handful
Harder than an anvil headache takin the advil
Ahead of fakes and im mad ill more than a capsule
Dose that is, fruity blunts like Sajns bros in it
Doin it composures thick as a pregnant swollen bitch
You know who it is that silver meddling kid
Dont take it to heart as i aim for the ribs messy bibs
Never doing it lightly putting gin in my iced tea
Or whatever to my liking on point like a viking
Hologram sightings cant believe my cypherin
Gotta another gram for the lighting i shock lightning
Just as my track is apostolic god with an alcoholic
Bust you in the back never saw it comin keep runnin
Like a sprint dashed hundred meter flash
Get you fast bitch no time for a reaction
Reach for the bible as i pull a mac 10
You can read my title with the shady accent
Cause when you say wasted im probably passed it
Like way above hairy situation need to shave my nuts
I may be fucked up but writing never gave it up
So ill write with a golden pen hells gates closing in
And when im in, Silver makes satan a bronze
people hating on me basedshady response
and they all applause break his jaw feedem apple sauce
Faggots raw? maybe like his anus when he gets it on
Thats about it, im finished i was in it now im out it
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Re: Buzzed Hologram

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 21st, '13, 02:28

Lawl at the fruity blunt line.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Buzzed Hologram

Postby Just Silver » Aug 23rd, '13, 14:12

bumpin then new project
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Re: Buzzed Hologram

Postby Just Silver » Aug 29th, '13, 01:56

last bump
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Re: Buzzed Hologram

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 29th, '13, 04:21

I like how the lines were short and to the point, it made it really laid back and easy to read. You've improved a lot from when you first started writing.
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Re: Buzzed Hologram

Postby Just Silver » Sep 5th, '13, 14:42

lol thanks guy :y:
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