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Ill Mind

Postby superman11 » Sep 16th, '13, 02:57

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Goofy piece I wrote to Ill Mind of Hopsin 4. Not sure how I feel about it.


I'm dumb enough to go and step to your show,
boo you and kill everyone thats left in the row.
You can take this as a warning I'm just letting you know,
I just get sicker so u haven't seen the best of my flow.
Never did good at school, man I never did shit right,
teachers kicked me out, asked howd I get so hype.
My counsellors gave up, said there's was nothin left but psyche,
now got my shrink like hold on let me get this right..
"You can't keep track of girls on your dick that are textin you
they chase you down and they all wanna have sex wit you
your execute a flow thats on point like a decimal
and at 10 yrs old you killed a teacher just for testin you
and my nurse wrote your balls are two big to call testicles
shit, that bitch was never even supposed to do a test on you"
then tells me to be honest I'm really impressed with you

Can't you tell doc, my rhymes are too complex for you.
I lost it, people ask what kind of drugs that im on.
I rep the best, new York city is where I'm from,
where we drink until our fuckin minds numb..
and we smoke until our fucking minds dumb.
Your times up, if I was you, than I'd run,
my rhymes stand tall, flow like I'm 9'1
add another 1 if you heard all the murders that I've done.
Think there's a better team than mine, than find one.
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Re: Ill Mind

Postby Eedee » Sep 16th, '13, 06:59

Haha this was a great piece.

and my nurse wrote your balls are two big to call testicles :laughing:
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Re: Ill Mind

Postby enjinn » Sep 16th, '13, 19:02

nice flow and rhymes...and the lyrics were dope
each one teaches one
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