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Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 25th, '13, 22:58

Feed * Superman11- Sirens

So restless, breakin sweats off these percocets
Feelin like shit , sheets tangled body is ripped
Into incisions when i sleep cant even flip im pissed
And my cuts got glue like elmers showers feel helpless
Cant get my front wet take another percocet
Shoulders burn to death in this bed permanent
Like a sharpie high as if i sniffed it
Body stiffens and all i got is my linguistics
To get passed with outlets like fires in houses
Desired to shout shit cause my pain is a copied form
That tell me what to do and where im goin
Says take 2 every 4 hours all willpower
Still hard to devour more especially when they beg for yours
Sweaty forehead and my legs are warm rest assure
I need rest for sure like career of Paulie Shore
Or probably more, fuck it give me 7 times 24
im weak but in a week i should be a sharper sword
All the pain hard to ignore i wanna smoke even more
Pourin my heart cause im bored on the mesage board
Under stress and such a whole mess of drugs
Holes in my head and lungs not what everyone does
Just till i feel better and can move and run
Mother had two kids im the stupid son
Even though he grew up not with her probably why not as hurt
Had the rich side that put him on a better path
I had the poor side left me in a ditch and crashed
Picture that , but with a throwaway Kodak
When i get better i just want you to know that
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Re: Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 26th, '13, 20:32

bumper then new piece
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Re: Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 27th, '13, 23:11

last bump then ill feed someone and get ready for something new
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Re: Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 27th, '13, 23:28

bigray wrote:I like this piece silver....most of it is probably true and that's what made it enjoyable for me.

Good rhymes as well and I flowed easily on it.

You should maybe try something knew u know? Totally different topic.

thanx guy yea this is all true

but as for something new i can try lol i kno i can get quite depressing

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Re: Percocet

Postby Flamez » Sep 27th, '13, 23:48

Good stuff man. I liked it the flow's there and everything. Keep it up.
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Re: Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 28th, '13, 00:31

thanks guylike bigray said though lol my drug type pieces need to be a thing of the past
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Re: Percocet

Postby Just Silver » Sep 28th, '13, 00:54

bigray wrote:Try some funny shit maybe.

ill try lol thats how i lost the silver title :( i wasnt funny enough
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