True Story

[Flamez]

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I’m in love with this nerdy girl at my school
should I ask her out? I just need to act cool
can’t be stupid and make a fool out of myself
but I’m scared what should I do? just be yourself
is what I hear my friend’s tell me to do, but shit
my balls shrink, I hit a wall and throw a fuckin’ fit
I have no game I can’t commit to this, I’m a shy guy
a guy without a job who’s nervous I ain’t gon’ lie
I need to try and impress to get her to like me
I tend to overdo shit and end up being a nobody
I start looking at my body I need to lose some weight
I need to motivate myself and bust open this gate
need to eliminate some fat so I start eating healthy foods
I got more confidence and noticed changes in my attitude
I cut back on junk food ate more fruit and veggies too
you know life’s good in two months down forty pounds less
no longer feeling insecure I feel blessed I’m tasting success
next day, I see her out on the town so I finally ask the girl out right?
well she said no, but it’s alright I’m cool I’ll just go home and write…

haha

[SoldierShady]

Step up ya multis game breh.

[Just Silver]

not always about multis though flow i think is more important overall

[Broken Beats]

luv u hollywood

[Francesco]

Yeah rhyming is kinda simple but it's good overall... keep it up homie!

[ilovebender.com]

Awww, sicc flow

[Flamez]

Thanks guys.

[SpiderDiaze]

Nice rhymes flames bro!

[JamaicanPattlez]

Step up ya multis game breh.

Agree with this. Rhymes are simple, but the flow and content is great. So, I won't criticize you for it cause you're probably new at this. Keep at it, and great job.

[FAME]

Agree with the others that the rhymes are simple, but the content is good. I liked it, had personality to it.

If this girl doesn't want you, another one will (: