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I've Had It

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I've Had It

Postby 4Corners » Oct 2nd, '13, 02:54

Instrumental (Shady 2.0 Cypher)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oD1jOl7b1UI

When I Rap tight, I act like I’m addicted to blow
Getting’ dough for not doing a god damn thing, tony romo
MIME, music is my everything, homie fuck the bling
Fuck women, I’m married to the game, this mic is my wedding ring
The thought of me spittin’ this shit, it oughta be like sodomy
Jesus, you best believe this, my words are like a prophecy
Just know it, I’m a poet, if it’s crunch time, you blow it
Never slowin’, rhymes growin’, flowin’ wit these skills, you better know it
Your rhymes are tired, and hip hops feelin’ expired
Wit a lighter, engulf the game in flames, the shit is burnin’ like a wildfire
Mobbin’ deep, a creep, fuckin’ pussies, leave em’ throbbin’
A bad man, I’m batman, shut up bitch you just robbin
I’ll fuck shit up, grab that chick and fuck the bitch up
Rape her, than take a stapler, make her god damn lips shut
The fuck up, such a slut you fuckin’ cunt, I’ll punch you in the gut
Foamin’ at the mouth’s what I’m about, I’m just a sick pup
Walk around wit a strut, rip that bitches fuckin’ ribs up
Eat the meat off the bones, than hiccup cuz I’m a sick fuck
I’d pimp my own girl out, fuck it bitch, get me paid
relationships, shit I only give a rat’s ass bout getting laid
and getting’ fast cash, Colfax, sell your fat ass
treatin’ hip hop like sex, never quick n fast, bitch I always last
is that too many syllables for you on this rhyme
my minds a design, on the rail, never fail, always grind
sorry buddy, but I’m little nutty, my girl is so slutty
she fucked so many guys that fuckin’ pussy look silly puddy
what a worthless bitch, trippin’ all day, fallin’ on dicks
shovin’ her in the oven, burnt to a crispy and I ain’t sorry bout shit
murderous psychopath, smokin’ crack, having a laugh
put your ass to sleep on the beat, like you was takin’ a nap
in fact this is my last rap that I have in the bag
this rap shit is magic, pulling these tricks straight up out my ass
not a bunny or rabbit, I’ve had it, gotta kick the habit
rappin’ till I’m capped wit a gat, they all like what the fuck happened
got shit to say till the day I’m in the grave, like a boss
I’ll end up like that one dude when he was strapped to the cross

CHORUS 2x: Can’t take this heat on the beat, than get fuck up out the kitchen
This just a meet and greet, say hi to raw lyricism
You can’t match it you faggot, ravage like I was a savage
Hip hop’s a sacred passage, mother fucker, I’VE HAD IT

Oh no, hoe, I’m a criminal again
A Villain wit a pen, possessin’ a shit eatin’ grin
Superbad, you mad, my dick in women, no permission
Super glad there ain’t a lab full of everybody’s semen
Give a fuck about you, don’t even care for my friends
Cuz In the end, they can dwell in hell for all of they sins
Fuck it, I’ll send em’ there, next is my ex girls
Sluts were sexy as fuck, but their morals make me wanna hurl
Rappin’ everyday, fuck what they say, I won’t stop
Not spittin’, sweat to god I’ll quit shittin’, off the pot
Got evil thoughts to jot, hip hop has flopped
Dead on the spot, from a blood clot, There’s no more cream of the crop
Beggin’ for anyone under the sun wit a gun
To come spray an AK at these whiggity whack rappers for fun
Straight shittin’ and pissin’ on em’, call me R Kelly
DMX wit a tech, pistol whippin’ punks like belly
Don’t apologize for ruinin’ lives, got demon eyes
Satantic genius , see this penis rise between your wives thigh’s
I rap against the law, eatin’ pussies like jaws
Mike Tyson, when I’m fightin’, bitin’, anyone I come across
There’s a storm comin’, guess that’s why you punks are runnin’
Sonnin’ all ya’ll on the beat, so neat, I killed em’ an hung em’
From the quest tower, this my hour, straight shittin’ on cowards
Scour an devour you faggots, than rape you girl in da shower
Buy her flowers, a lil’ powder, as I crowd her
Make a tape of the rape, just for you, watch me as I plow her
devil incarnate, there’s shit brewin’, don’t start it
So retarded when I spit, you straight shit your pants like you sharted
Graffic, problematic, I’m a fuckin’ rap addict
People’s hate, I attract it, stick this racket up your ass
A perfect fit, fuck you, your kids, your bitch
Watch me show boat this shit, twsit of da wrist, all your throats slit
You hate me for spittin’ wicked wild wit style
When I depict satantic shit, I’ll make it all worth your while
End this shit like Armageddon, I know hell is where I’m headin’
Fuck heaven, we all gods children, I’m the one he’s dreadin’
My lyrics are weapons of mass destruction, fuck it I love em’
Eatin’ pussies for lunch, sucker punch em, then I fuck em

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Re: I've Had It

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 02:59

you cant post without giving feedback and u gotta delete that 3 post stuff
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Re: I've Had It

Postby 4Corners » Oct 2nd, '13, 03:02

Should have read the rules thing, my bad.
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Re: I've Had It

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 03:06

4Corners wrote:Should have read the rules thing, my bad.

yea no big deal just copyn paste your feedback link and your good although feedback should be constructive and have at least 3 sentences
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