Final Warning (Remix)

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 12th, '13, 07:17

Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=164193&p=2365274#p2365274
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jNGjbyFV5Rw (Might have to re-loop it, for some reason the dude didn't put the full instrumental on YT but did in the download link smh)

(I also have the audio recording I did as well, if people want to hear it.)

[Intro]

Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt, Na na na na na na na na na,
Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt, Na na na na na na na na na,
And its not gonna be me...

Verse I:

When I first met you, I thought I won the jackpot,
But it turns out, Judas got me caught in some advanced plot,
Where the story goes, guy falls in love with girl,
And when we finally touched, my thoughts aren't from this world,
Cause I would see love, but I saw nothing first,
So if your heart's bleedin', I gotta suffer worse,
Cause you're an evil broad, and life just loves to hurt
And honestly, I wanna fuckin' hurl,
Girl, every time I want to go hang out with my niggas,
You get demonic and then you're cashing all out as a victim,
Obviously I was fooled, and how tragic is this picture,
It's ironic how I have to be ass out with women,
And I wish I never met you, I feel like I'm your prisoner,
This shit is super stressful, I'm only seen at certain intervals,
I gotta find some safer way for me to flee the scene,
And as I escape this fate to leave, that's when I hear you scream...

[Hook]

This is your final warning,
There’s a dark cloud overhead,
This is your final warning,
Just remember what I said,
Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt,
Na na na na na na na na na,
Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt,
Na na na na na na na na na,
And its not gonna be me...

Verse II:

That damn warning shot's all up in my mental now,
I also started mourning, I'm honest, shit, I'll tell ya how,
Imagine if the girl you once loved now has a killer's vibe,
It'd have any man run down and have ya terrified,
Mainly cause she knows your weak points and she's bound to exploit it,
There's no remorse from these hoes, and proudly she knows it,
And as we think of these reasons to stress,
I think we're all forgetting she literally loves me to death,
I mean, what the hell's up with all the blood love notes I'm finding?
Somehow I'm involved with this one cut-throat live wire,
And she's very adept to telling me lies, and,
Yeah... just like Jekyll, you Hyde it,
I ain't surprised, cause you're crazy as shit,
And honestly right now you're tryna bait me to sin,
I gotta find some safer way for me to flee the scene,
And as I escape this fate to leave, that's when I hear you scream...

[Hook]

This is your final warning,
There’s a dark cloud overhead,
This is your final warning,
Just remember what I said,
Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt,
Na na na na na na na na na,
Yeah, someone’s gonna get hurt,
Na na na na na na na na na,
And its not gonna be me...

Cuz you’re the one thing,
You are, you are the one thing...

by **ilovebender.com** » Oct 12th, '13, 14:38

This reminds me of something that's bugging me in my life right now.
Great lyrics.

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 12th, '13, 16:45

ilovebender.com wrote:This reminds me of something that's bugging me in my life right now.
Great lyrics.

Thanks homie. :smoking:

by **SpiderDiaze** » Oct 13th, '13, 18:34

Beat goes we'll with your rhymes bro. Great flow and loved the second verse some deep meaningful lyrics in there aswell, can probably relate to most of this. Be looking out for more of your work in the future. Great work. :y:

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 13th, '13, 18:38

Diazepam150mg wrote:Beat goes we'll with your rhymes bro. Great flow and loved the second verse some deep meaningful lyrics in there aswell, can probably relate to most of this. Be looking out for more of your work in the future. Great work.

Thanks.

I appreciate it! I used to drop often back in the day, until the section died pretty much, but this place used to be super lively. I'll try to drop more often. :y:

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 16th, '13, 07:02

Bump.

by **CanadaPure** » Oct 17th, '13, 07:07

Interesting choice of a song to remix, but I thought it worked very well. Lots of meaning behind your lyrics, and everything blended together really nicely. Well done.

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 17th, '13, 07:16

CanadaPure wrote:Interesting choice of a song to remix, but I thought it worked very well. Lots of meaning behind your lyrics, and everything blended together really nicely. Well done.

Thanks CP! :y:

by **Eedee** » Oct 18th, '13, 02:35

You know I love your writing style. This is no exception. I'm feelin' this. Imagery was great. :y:

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 18th, '13, 03:34

Eedee wrote:You know I love your writing style. This is no exception. I'm feelin' this. Imagery was great.

Eedee da gawd. :worship:

Haha thanks man! I appreciate it.

by **Eedee** » Oct 18th, '13, 05:21

No problem. Have you started listening to the album yet by any chance?

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 18th, '13, 06:17

Eedee wrote:No problem. Have you started listening to the album yet by any chance?

No I haven't! I'm gonna go take a listen now, a lot of people have been saying it's dope, so I wanna hear for myself. It looks like you put work in.

by **SpiderDiaze** » Oct 18th, '13, 18:32

JP when you making more material bro?

by **JamaicanPattlez** » Oct 18th, '13, 18:35

I've actually got a few verses I wrote that I can post up, plus I'm writing some verses for recording as we speak. When they'll go up? Hmm.. maybe tonight, or something like that. I don't usually drop anymore cause this section's dead lmao, but I'll try to be more active again.

by **Halftongue Dre** » Oct 19th, '13, 11:55

dope my dude. the "I mean, what the hell's up with all the blood love notes I'm finding?
Somehow I'm involved with this one cut-throat live wire" line was my favorite. Keep up yo..

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