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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Eedee » Oct 14th, '13, 03:12

Spyder wrote:You told me you made a new verse for my track lol

Your off the ball n9t getting my references. Go back to Australia dog


No I didn't. I told you I was using the cypher verse because I liked it and didn't want to keep it just a written. Smh.
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby mdemaz » Oct 14th, '13, 03:28

Sarah says hi.
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Eedee » Oct 14th, '13, 03:34

mdemaz wrote:Sarah says hi.


Who the fuck is Sarah?

Btw 7k posts. Shout-out thread, do it ya bish
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby mdemaz » Oct 14th, '13, 03:46

No, I'm not an attention seeking fucknut.
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Eedee » Oct 14th, '13, 03:55

Says you.
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Francesco » Oct 14th, '13, 09:14

TR wins... :worship:
Big ups for all y'all!
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Oct 16th, '13, 00:21

bump i think this deserves a little more attention
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby FAME » Oct 16th, '13, 04:44

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Flowed so easy over the beat, loved it. I agree with Eedee about the penny purchase line, good stuff. Also really liked this line for some reason, maybe because it flows so well.
"Like MF im the F'in best you need an S.O.S"

Eedee
Love the opening line, such a good rhyme. Liked the little story, Breaking Bad inspired I assume? Also the last line made me laugh.

CanadaPure
"Cause I'll close a mans air hole with rhymes burning up the oxygen,
Buy your bitch and make her work 'till she earns enough to talk again"
:worship: Loved this part, the content throughout was hilarious. I want more.

Bigray
Some awesome mulits in the verse, and I like the short story. Feel bad for the guy, his life is pretty shitty.

KoLyRic
A lot of good punchlines in here. End line is so dope :y: Really enjoyed reading it, the rhymes flowed together good.

Flamez
"the Bullet holes on your whole body lookin’ like tattoos"
Awesome imagery here, whole verse crazy & insane, liked the style.

Mr. DGAF
Opening part was awesome, and so was the rest of the verse. This section is kind of dead compared to when I was last here, hopefully that changes.

Mdemaz
I agree with Eedee that it starts out awesome, and not that the quality of the content goes down further on in the verse. But it doesn't flow as well.

TheFlyingSpaghettiMonster
Content is pretty crazy & with that imagery I won't sleep tonight, so thank you. Quality verse :y:

Superman11
"shit and pissed on than tossed in a blender
mixed up so bad the coroner can't even tell ya gender."
Remind me never to cross you, loved this line for some sick reason. Whole verse was solid, awesome mulits

Rollesfen
Simplistic rhymes, but I liked the call outs to Em. Keep practicing and you will improve, can't wait to see what you can put out
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Eedee » Oct 18th, '13, 02:37

A few things, FAME:

A) Who the fuck are you and why haven't I seen you around before? You seem dope.

B) Yes, I've been on a Breaking Bad streak and wanted to incorporate some elements into there.

C) Thanks!
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Oct 18th, '13, 02:59

Any feed is good feed
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Halftongue Dre » Oct 19th, '13, 12:28

mdemaz was dope. so funny..

"I'm too much to handle, come on and hit me, take the gamble dude
I'm not right in the head, walking around with a leather doll"
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Halftongue Dre » Oct 19th, '13, 12:29

all the ones i've read are great. canada's was good i remember..
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Re: Just Silver & Superman present: TRshady Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Oct 24th, '13, 02:25

last bump alot of effort was put into this we need feed :(
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