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Rise Up

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Rise Up

Postby Flamez » Nov 15th, '13, 00:59

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=166729&p=2470521

buried alive in dirt inside a coffin it’s time to rise up
keep corrupting this earth and like a volcano erupt
full of violence above the law fuck the government
sign my own death warrant your opinion is irrelevant
I know death is imminent I live life like I wanna live it
u don’t like it well I never told you to jump into my shit
get off my ship you were never invited into my life
I survive in order to live, my advice is don’t think twice
like nike just do it don’t act surprised stop pretending
Just be yourself, but now it’s time for me to start ascending
stepping up to home plate you know it’s already over
clock’s done ticking but I haven’t lost my composure
playing poker like Phil Ivey never know if I’m bluffing
crushing blows to your face you’d think I was boxing
dropping toxic bombs don’t get religious I ain’t Jesus
It’s the breath of Chuck Norris with a pen of a genius

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Re: Rise Up

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 15th, '13, 19:59

i really like the 'just dont give a fuck' attitude of this piece :y:
the ryming is solid, and the topic is stuck to for the most part. nice job :flutter:
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horse wrote:You’ll never go gold, that’s why you’re just silver

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Re: Rise Up

Postby enjinn » Nov 16th, '13, 03:21

good verse...flow was nice with cool lines...Keep writing
each one teaches one
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Re: Rise Up

Postby Flamez » Nov 17th, '13, 17:30

thanks guys haha
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