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The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 19th, '13, 04:01

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=166840&p=2478470#p2478470

Diazepam150mg

I'm just a white British kid seen as a Hip Hop militant
Entered the Hip Hop scene illegally like an immigrant
Now I'm seen as a diligent migrant
Who sparked a mainstream incident
What a coincidence
I’m now all alone like a homeless child hungry to the bone
Moved to the big city and saw things differently
Like I’m about to take the game instantly 
While I see me career distantly
Committing criminal activity for the publicity 
Dreams seem a reality like an outsider within the locality
So I rhyme to strike the nerve within your teeth’s cavity
 Making your dreams ever so slightly
Like the mind of a mental patients insanity
While I find myself in the mind of your girlfriends sexual fantasy
My head is in pain
Think I got a migraine
Like I just shot a Great Dane
In the head and set it on fire with propane
They say I can make it rain
And that I cause excruciating pain
A deadly combination
Like a shotgun and Kurt Cobain
I leave rappers with severe muscle spasms
Like I leave bitches with intense orgasms
Covered Mila KunisIn some of that Jewish ectoplasm
I see it as a learning curve
Diss rappers in my rhymes best served
Like a struck a raw nerveInside their spinal curve
They call me Cobain's shotgun I end careers
Quicker than a fat dude crashed his truck
Into a family of deer’s after 6 beers
I roll like a set of dice
You can call me Sonny from Miami Vice
Im an upgrade from Macklemore
And Vanilla Ice

sneakerheadshady:

How I started writing, this story is close to me
it’s how I became who I was supposed to be
and the reasons why I’m not stuck up a tree
My rap style is kinda like flying kites,
The other rappers are just alright,
I’ve been workin hard with all my might.
but writing raps is the toughest fight,
Especially if you are fucking white.
But if Marshall's aight, then so am I,
It shouldn't seem like such a fright.
this is my story ill bring to light
Through my frustration, exasperation,
TRShady taught me to write entertainment
They let me know who I am, busting out of containment
And how to write slams, with crazy flowing insane-ness
teaching me to jam, writing scribbles with crayons
there’s a lot of important shit that I rely upon
but without any of y'all I couldn’t have written this song.
hanging out here all day long,
finally able write my wrongs,
Without writing I wouldn’t have known where I belong.

Just Silver:

It was about the age of one three I found something
That I used to laugh at but was now constantly bumping
I knew one thing I want to be apart of it
Used to bite lyrics cause iwanna play the rapper bit
Even though half of it was so complex
It made me interested more and on the journey I left
Never had a journal just text on the shady forum
From plain boredom to illuminated screen on the corner
Of the room I would write Eminem I idolized
So it all took flight in this passion I synchronized
Light and darkness finally a silent mind
Never at rest drugs I dabbled with medicine chests
Wanna be better than the rest baked like chicken breast
I used to sit at my desk freestyle in my head
Freestyle with the buds and smoke the size of a leg
Eminem Show first album that said
The shit that made me get hyped as a kid
Introduced by my faggot Cousin some irony
Used to listen to rock but I liked the rhyming themes
Now guitars are embarrassing and countrys a travesty
Getting better year by year from day to night
Megabyte to gigabytes till I spit it right
I'll be forever nice practice makes perfect
But remember nobody's perfect just put work in
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#Silver #Rolly #bigray #Pain #flamez #charlotte #Hage #Samantha #guilty #eedee #horsefam #snake #raul #EG
horse wrote:You’ll never go gold, that’s why you’re just silver

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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 19th, '13, 20:17

Bump...
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horse wrote:You’ll never go gold, that’s why you’re just silver

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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby Just Silver » Nov 19th, '13, 22:34

Bumplestiltskin shit is Nice and overlooked
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 20th, '13, 12:24

bump… c'mon guys we worked hard on this...
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby Flamez » Nov 21st, '13, 00:53

Feed has been dying in cw so..

Good shit from the three of ya. Just Silver with good stuff like always. haha keep it up.
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby Just Silver » Nov 21st, '13, 00:54

Thanks guy were trying to redeem it
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 21st, '13, 00:58

Flamez wrote:Feed has been dying in cw so..

Good shit from the three of ya. Just Silver with good stuff like always. haha keep it up.

good feed ;)
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby Just Silver » Nov 21st, '13, 00:59

I know lol was sorta lackluster but any feed is good
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 21st, '13, 01:02

Just Silver wrote:I know lol was sorta lackluster but any feed is good

true shiz
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby SpiderDiaze » Nov 21st, '13, 17:16

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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby SpiderDiaze » Nov 21st, '13, 18:52

Horsebot3K wrote:I wouldn't have put two Cobain suicide jokes in the same verse (unless repetitiveness was joke you were going for, in which case it gets a pass), but these are good verses. Lol at the Mila Kunis line. :y:


Thanks for the feedback bro, appreciate it. :y:
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 21st, '13, 19:22

Horsebot3K wrote:I wouldn't have put two Cobain suicide jokes in the same verse (unless repetitiveness was joke you were going for, in which case it gets a pass), but these are good verses. Lol at the Mila Kunis line. :y:

thanks for finally feedingit :)
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby Just Silver » Nov 22nd, '13, 13:12

Last bump then new project
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 22nd, '13, 13:44

Just Silver wrote:Last bump then new project

word on the bump :'(
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Re: The Write Brothers - sneaker, diaze, silver

Postby SpiderDiaze » Nov 27th, '13, 14:49

bump
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