is it that bad??????

[sinemm]

well i dont even know..i didnt like it so much but is it that bad?


take a deep breathe..feel the life..
trust somebody..make a fire..
dont be mad..dont pull yourself down..
its so short..dont waste your time..

its like a game..u can win but u can lost too..
dont give it up..believe in that..u will do..
never cry for pain..and never forget its jus up to u..

someday everythin will change including u..
including your life the ppl around u..
the habits even sth that u never wanna lose..
u will be suprised cuz its jus so true..

when u've got somebody's back..
they should have got yours too..
dont be selfish..dont lose the innocent spirit tho..
have some reasons..love somebody..
and hold some hands through..

put the lies into a suitcase..
throw it to the sea and jus forget..
go and understand that how love is great..
go and tell evrybody how u love them
realise their importance tp you..
and heres the end..

[katastrophe]

its.............................idk. it could use some work. maybe its the way im interpreting it but it sounds off beat. here is how i would write it:


take a deep breathe..feel the life..
trust somebody..hold them tight..
dont be mad..dont pull yourself down..
lifes so short..dont do that now..

its like a game..u can win but can lost too..
dont give it up..believe in it..and its what you'll do..
never cry for pain..and never forget its up to u..
its your life..what will you pursue?

someday everythin will change including u..
including your life and the ppl with u..
the habits even sth that u never wanna lose..
u will be suprised cuz its jus so true..

when u've got somebody's back..
they should have got yours too..
dont be selfish..dont lose the spirit in you..
have some reasons..love someone true..
hold some hands and they will hold yours too..

put the lies into a suitcase..
and throw them out..
tell people u love them without a doubt..
go and take care of the people u love..
realize their importance to you..
before its done..

its up to u if u like it or not but thats how i would do it

[sinemm]

well in fact i got suprised..thats good i liked it..thnx tho..but its jus sth belongs to me.. u didnt ahve to change it...but anyway..!

[Coccoa]

So and so.