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Misguided

Postby Dewey Decimal » Nov 21st, '13, 20:06

Same old dewey, Still hate life, still love suzie
Gotta go to court cuz my lawyers tryina sue me
Im distressed, got the world wondering which wrist imma slit next
I did the impossible but nobodys impressed
So fuck it im dealing drugs and collecting some welfare
Im invincible but i still got that free health care
I fuck like a rabbit with these playboy bunnies
I need a calculator just to count my money
Yeah go ahead and say Dewey's a Dummy
But no amount of weed would make that funny
"Dirty in a cockpit, blazeing up"
While Dewey's in Heaven smoking Angel Dust
"Stop fronting when u made it up"
Wrists full of slits and paper cuts
Fuck flashlights, Dewey Glows in Darkness
And i just made a studio out of my studio apartment
Yeah im still broke and im poor
But you cant tell me that im homeless no more
A Few More Years and ill Hop out a Benz
Went back to school just so i could drop out again
But im Still Armed WIth a Pen & A Pad
Spent more time in detention than i did Regular Class
Even got the devil telling me to right my wrongs
I just sniffed a Line of Coke a Mile Long


The 2 lines in quotes are From an Ol' dirty bastard song. R.I.P

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Re: Misguided

Postby Flamez » Nov 21st, '13, 20:24

Good read yo. Nice flow, good rhyming, and some good lines too. :y:
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Re: Misguided

Postby Dewey Decimal » Nov 22nd, '13, 19:18

Thanks man. Upping
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Re: Misguided

Postby Minimii » Nov 24th, '13, 02:00

im rly tired but i thought this was funny
and i dont even write this to get LOF i just write it cos i thought i was fony to red
Cause you'll never take my pride from me
It'll have to be bribed from me"
- marshall "sellout" mathers
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Re: Misguided

Postby Dewey Decimal » Nov 24th, '13, 20:20

Thanks for viewing it bro
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Re: Misguided

Postby IBasicallyRage » Nov 30th, '13, 18:08

Lmao I loved this. Keep it up.
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