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Postby Boston » Nov 22nd, '13, 00:52

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well seems like i havent posted in awhile.. i dropped audio here and usually never get around in this section of the forum.. but heres a verse i just did .. let me know what yall think. thanks

who you think could hold a light or flame? writing quite insane/
on the mic im not the type to differ - its quite the same/
i like to fight my brain, and i welcome evil thoughts/
smoking weed and pot and crashed the motor bike knievel bought/
whatchu think i ran from the scene?
do u really think i gave a fuck about the victim who paniced and screamed?/
do you think i planned it to bleed?/
do you think theres anyone on this earth whose as crazy and manic as me?!/
and oh damn i planted a seed ... im having a boy/
name it marshall mathers and have it grow up on the map in detroit/
i thought my guns broken but the way i was gun toting/
it was only a matter of time before i got this thing cocked and gun smoking/
ok now, im done joking-hada hell of a time, im done poking/
fun, im done, i love my son its time to run now that ive spoken/
so i should put the pen down its me you and this dead sound/
i need to come to grips its time to quit but i just cant pretend now/
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Francesco » Nov 22nd, '13, 04:30

Nice drop Boston... :y:
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Nov 22nd, '13, 12:01

Thank you man
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Dewey Decimal » Nov 22nd, '13, 19:09

"smoking weed and pot and crashed the motor bike knievel bought/"

"and oh damn i planted a seed ... im having a boy/
name it marshall mathers and have it grow up on the map in detroit/"

Those lines were nice as fuck ..... The rest of it was cool but those really stood out
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Nov 22nd, '13, 20:51

Thanks appreciate it
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 22nd, '13, 21:30

i like this, the rhyme switches up alot, but it still flows, which is really aweosme and keeps me attentive. also the knievial line was dope :b:
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Nov 22nd, '13, 22:24

thank u my friend
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 23rd, '13, 01:42

Boston wrote:thank u my friend

np fam
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Nov 24th, '13, 14:55

Welp thanks everyone. More soon
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Flamez » Nov 27th, '13, 01:54

Pretty cool and shit. I like it had some nice lines.
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Nov 29th, '13, 18:27

Thanks
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Just Silver » Dec 6th, '13, 01:26

Good piece simple but clean
Although I didn't care for the Marshall line but other than that I liked it

The knievel line was sorta cool

Just try to flow as long as possible I learned from the tourny short lines usually suck
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 6th, '13, 19:48

Just Silver wrote: I learned from the tourny short lines usually suck

:laughing: apparently thats true
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Re: been some years since i posted in here

Postby Boston » Dec 8th, '13, 12:26

What u mean haha
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