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Been Real

Postby SlimBG » Nov 24th, '13, 01:14

So I 've tried writing shit before but didnt seem to have the passion and lately i feel really motivated about it so here goes

"I BEEN REAL"




I've been a fan of hip hop since I was a little baby
listen to Slim Shady
shooting up bitches from his Mercedes
this music made me
and also the drugs I often took just to get me faded
i don't drop bombs, I detonate them
from afar
sittin and chillin
with a cigar
but my momma always screaming
about getting my shit together
and Im thinking thats never ever
gonna happen but Im sick from all the yappin
so I started rappin
and it seems Im good at it
so my rhymes wont be stoppin
shit...If i could remember and maintain
all the thoughts that pop in my brain
I could be the best in the game
without an aim
More like Cobain high on cocaine
if you know what i mean



Im just a common man
thinking uncommon things
but in the end we all same
we all got demons
thats why im fiending
My worst enemy is myself
and I wont be leavin
my red shot eyes wont stop beamin
sometimes i even sit and wonder what if my mother actually smokes pot
ahh why I bother, Id just rather be thinking she does
It'll just make me feel better about that fat blunt full of hash
that I had stashed
then one night i puffed puffed but didnt pass
got sick and puked in the bath
now Im taking out all the trash I had attached to my back
all in the past, live your life to the max
cuz its going too fast and nothing is everlast
my hearts already waiting for me in the bodybag
all I have left is anger, these bars, a pack of cigars , and this middle finger
so i let it linger,
im a lyrical weapon and my index is on the trigger
my confidence is only getting bigger
im just a begginer
on the road to be a winner,
with these rhymes and flow i sting em
a born sinner, and a full fledged dreamer
who likes smoking, drinking and poppin pills
not proud about it but bitch Im still real
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Re: Been Real

Postby Francesco » Nov 24th, '13, 03:35

I'm just a beginner
on the road to be a winner


Pretty good right there little homie... :y:

Enrich your vocab & you'll be able to drop some nice ish... Rep that BG!
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Re: Been Real

Postby CanadaPure » Nov 24th, '13, 06:48

Please read the CW Rules, you need Link of Feedback.
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