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Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby Boston » Nov 30th, '13, 15:49

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Heres a verse i wrote to eminems groundhog day beat.. I never usually write to em beats but ay.
Hope yall enjoy.

Fuck a rap career i rather have a union job/
and get my act in gear so i dont have to be this stupid slob/
all you do is rob, me of respect this stupid song/
is just to shove it down your fucking neck so i can prove you wrong/
Im never caving in or tappin out the cave your in im draggin out
your body beat your ass until your blacking out/
Until your black and blue ill fucking beat you blue and black/
Its true infact ill bruise and scratch until theres nothing of you attached/
They shoulda threw and trapped me, put me ina room and latch me/
With these rappers and my competition is me and who exactly?/
Ya im truly wacky people all they do is ask me/
throwing questions in my face like is it really true your happy?/
I grew up on some marshall mathers through my baby times/
So all the violent scenes that start to gather in my crazy mind/
Maybe i can maybe rhyme maybe i can maybe climb/
My way up to the top i showed respect so you should pay me mine/
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby shadyblogger » Nov 30th, '13, 16:54

Pretty nice
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby IBasicallyRage » Nov 30th, '13, 18:10

Haha Man I loved it, a lot of great lines. Pure genius.
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby Francesco » Dec 1st, '13, 03:47

Nice drop Boston... some very nice lines! :y:
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby Boston » Dec 2nd, '13, 22:21

Thank you all. Appreciate it
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby MichaelLawLtd » Dec 7th, '13, 12:53

cool :8)
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 7th, '13, 22:00

Hey man, it does fit on the beat, did u get an instrumental?

Anyway, quite dope!
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby Boston » Dec 10th, '13, 12:26

Recorded in audio section
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby Francesco » Dec 13th, '13, 02:42

Boston wrote:Thank you all. Appreciate it


Anytime homie... :y:
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Re: Wrote to eminem groundhog day

Postby hundreth » Dec 27th, '13, 00:30

That blue and black line... dope. The ending was also nice.
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