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Re: I am the champ

Postby Just Silver » Dec 3rd, '13, 18:58

I flip the flow up to show you my versatilityKillin’ these bars lyrically spillin’ my heart literally  good stuff here classic ray

Really good flow until the end of the piece and first few bars I read in a Bronson type of way
Which is cool

The shoutout/shots were a nice touch

Good luck in the comp :y:
Overall the flow stands out and has improved
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Re: I am the champ

Postby Francesco » Dec 4th, '13, 02:32

Another nice one Ray... :y:
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Re: I am the champ

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 4th, '13, 23:20

I really liked how you said you'd switch the flow up to show your versatility, and then near the end it seemed like it actually did change when the bars got shorter. Your writing has improved a lot, which I say every time, but it's true!

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Re: I am the champ

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Dec 4th, '13, 23:25

I really liked this piece bigray, nice flow and rhymes. Thought you bringing up every group at the end was sick, letting everyone know your the Don and shit, that's cool haha. Anyway nice little drop brother.
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