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Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 4th, '13, 05:30

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=167474#p2504254
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Dear Silver... I know we've had our differences in the past,
I like letting men in my ass, and you insist that it's bad,
Listen, I'm glad that I'm able to give you inspiration but man,
This situation is bad, why'd we just piss away what we had?
Those songs you write about me hurt, I thought we were friends,
I think about when we used to play and pray that it would not be pretend,
I take a cock and it sends you into this panic spiral,
I want to reunite, and fuck, if you won't plan it, I will,
I want the barbecues, I still want to feed you my meat,
Lets bump Eminem again, if I offended you I didn't mean to, I mean,
Yeah I fuck dudes, but Silver, I've always been in love with you,
Fuck, It's true, fuck incest, I just want to make love to you,
And every guy I'm with, I always pretend that it's you,
I know you don't like me, but I pretend that you do,
I know I lost your respect, but I feel like I nearly had it,
Anyway, I'm sorry, I'll always love you, Sincerely, Adam.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Dec 4th, '13, 05:40

As disturbing as this piece is, it's really well written and that fact that you brought it out after Silver dropped part 3 is really impressive. Well done brother.
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 4th, '13, 05:41

PAINKILLƎR wrote:As disturbing as this piece is, it's really well written and that fact that you brought it out after Silver dropped part 3 is really impressive. Well done brother.


Read his and wrote this right away! :y:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Dec 4th, '13, 05:55

CanadaPure wrote:
PAINKILLƎR wrote:As disturbing as this piece is, it's really well written and that fact that you brought it out after Silver dropped part 3 is really impressive. Well done brother.


Read his and wrote this right away! :y:

...and you insist that it's bad,
Listen, I'm glad that I'm able to give you inspiration but man,
This situation is bad, why'd we just piss away what we had?
Those songs you write about me hurt, I thought we were friends,


I thought this was great really. Like if this weren't some gay jokey shit then this could've been some like heartbreaking relationship shit but instead I'm fucking dying reading this point of view adam verse you made.

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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby Just Silver » Dec 4th, '13, 12:58

It was pretty good lol

Better than pt.2 and I think my pt3 is better than 1

The way it is phrased is much better than mine
And choices of rhymes were also better

I need to step it up for uncle mitch pt.1

Ive been trying to rhyme less so that might be what I'm lacking lately
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby Francesco » Dec 4th, '13, 13:58

Damn... You didn't need much time... Did you? Nice one too... :y:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 4th, '13, 18:19

Francesco wrote:Damn... You didn't need much time... Did you? Nice one too... :y:


10-15 minutes tops. Thanks homie!
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 4th, '13, 20:19

Ok so the first response was a semi diss. But this, this was much moe of a follow up. Well written, good story telling. Its a strange topic, but its sick. Also it remind me of Stan tbh.... Nice post
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby Francesco » Dec 5th, '13, 02:34

CanadaPure wrote:
Francesco wrote:Damn... You didn't need much time... Did you? Nice one too... :y:


10-15 minutes tops. Thanks homie!


Anytime... :y: I'm impressed too!
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 5th, '13, 12:44

15 minutes wrote you a dope piece too! :sweating:
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Dec 6th, '13, 22:16

no man is supposed to like those, but fuck! it's well written
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 7th, '13, 18:19

yo devils advocate i just notice that you have 10k posts :b: damn i never saw that
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Dec 7th, '13, 20:05

Ive dwell around these parts.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: Adam My Faggot Cousin Part. 4

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 7th, '13, 21:21

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:Ive dwell around these parts.

nice :y:
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