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Writing on stronger than i was

Postby DarrenEminem » Dec 5th, '13, 00:13

i know i shouldnt,
But its this monster constant whispering i should do it,
With this force of love i cant conquir,
Censoring only makes it worset, cause neglecting the person, is a massive curse,
Where was the time where once love,
Was so easy accesable, but i felt in the hands of morpheus,
Everytime i see you its like a chloraform rag, just carries me away in the open sea,
You were so hard to find in this hash tack,
But i found you and got stomped back,
Well this is comeback, and i cap that,
Why wanna loose when i got this 1 shot,
My heart sparks like this bon fire, target spotted but this is chemical war,
This love and dna dont fit each other,
But its my responsibility to lit the lithium,
Milk it for what this shit is worthy of,
A gold necklace or a kiss to crunch my sto-,
Mach, cause i black out when i paint the picture,
I wont back out but i noticed the canvas,
Is getting smaller the closer im getting to you, im channeling love with a pencil,
Like michelangelo did with a painbrush,
A killer instinct with words but a mind of 5yrs old when it comes to love,
maybe i made the wrong decision, and could've choose someone else in the same position,
cause now i lost a good friend and bunch of personality, a sandwich of hate,revenge smushing faith,
my eyes are like a concussion grenade, i feel like a foreigner raped, cause this demon inside, is like a female version of hyde,
the similarities don't lie, my angels inside cry, this language of love is a vocabulary to far,
it was like an arm wrestle, were hand in hand but a constant struggle, and our compound schedule,
didnt make it easier to clear, but now I'm getting stronger finally realized what I'm worth of,
picked the pennies and shoot for stars, neglect the asteroids, I'm standing back up,
i dried my tears, and straightened myself, i have faith in, my own helping hands,
this road to hell became hall of fighters, these scars in my body are food for jealous, people,
i have to come to the conclusion that what we had will never come back, our gaps will never be refilled,
but my backpack of experience in love has done great,
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Re: Writing on stronger than i was

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 5th, '13, 00:29

needs a link of feedback, pm me one and i will reopen
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