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What Was I Thinking?????

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What Was I Thinking?????

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 7th, '13, 22:06

Hmm, I am normally not good at just writing without a beat, Im not used to making my stuff flow and rhyme with just words and no voice. But anyways, I decided to scribble down a couple thoughts and "make them rhyme" lmao.... feel free to critique and yeah. enjoy :y:

W.W.I.T.?

What was I thinking?... I'm not sure

My eastern influenced senses insist Ax-d finish the job please man
but this business is so insensitive, I'm just insecure at this instance
instantly my memories of incest instigate me to investigate this incident
I instantly lost consciousness…
Infinite mind emotions that empty this can of lotions,
smells like hidden cats in coats rolled
dinosaurs arrive in boats so
conquer Aztecs, conquer thoughts
the mayans conquered all you fucks
didn't you once thought, the two thousand what?
sprouts and stops, like what the fuck for?
well I'm just bored, crafted a lyrical sword
and swerved, to serve both sides of them whores
rice and spagetti, tacos, escargots baby
Lets fill the pot with human thoughts and eat them like its ready to go boy
Might as well call the president and ask for bells to ring your messages
ANSWER ME!!!, I must confess that ain't me the one that made this mess
Ask a Demon what's the angel made of?… Trust I guess?
Lust that its frozen turns into monster wings, and falls again.
Why do I write like this?
No sense dribble with fake metaphors to lie like this?
I survive like this!, Home set didn't break the festival, just your sick white ears!
This man's queer… looking at me like this nigga I fear!
Wiggle my penis in circles til' this bitch is cleared!!
I mean this place… but you know that
so afterwards I can fuck your bitch right here!!!!… Holla!


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Re: What Was I Thinking?????

Postby B.A.D. » Dec 9th, '13, 15:57

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Re: What Was I Thinking?????

Postby emin3m_stan » Dec 9th, '13, 16:39

Raw rhymes bro, keep up the good work.
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Re: What Was I Thinking?????

Postby Francesco » Dec 11th, '13, 02:30

Very very good drop homie... :worship:
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Postby mdemaz » Dec 11th, '13, 08:46

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