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Re: Big Cat

Postby ilovebender.com » Dec 11th, '13, 05:23

shadyblogger wrote:Sat down one day and decided to write a rap
Didn't know what to write about so I wrote about a fucking cat
The fucking cat was so big that it didn't fit in the front or back
Of my Hummer it was such a bummer that I took it back
To the animal shelter and said "I ain't dealing with such a fat cat-"
Lady cut me off like "you can't return an animal. What's up with that?"
I'm like "yes I can"
She said "guess again"
I threw the cat on the counter all 80,000 pounds of her
And walked out of that bitch left the lady feeling like I raped her from the back
And I said "that's it, I'm done with cats"
So I went and bought a dog
That's right dawg I went and bought a dog
And here goes story number 1 in my little rhyme log

LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=167587#p2508427
This seems like rap-rock like nu' metal off the bat, to me but could be a comedy rap or a punk rock song, hehe/jeje.
'what's up with that' reminded me of Will Smith and his Prince of Bel-Air days, in a good way.
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Re: Big Cat

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 11th, '13, 05:25

ilovebender.com wrote:This seems like rap-rock like nu' metal off the bat, to me but could be a comedy rap or a punk rock song, hehe/jeje.
'what's up with that' reminded me of Will Smith and his Prince of Bel-Air days, in a good way.


Yeah I guess I was going for like a comedy rap with a lot of sporadic lines and ideas flying around. Thanks
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Re: Big Cat

Postby ilovebender.com » Dec 11th, '13, 05:26

page 2 edit; was cool, like the title! :) it's 'eye catching'..
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Re: Big Cat

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 11th, '13, 05:27

ilovebender.com wrote:page 2 edit; was cool, like the title! :) it's 'eye catching'..


Thanks bro! :y:
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Re: Big Cat

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 13th, '13, 20:02

shady blogger, just letting you know, PM the CC verse when your finshed
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