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80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 9th, '13, 02:29

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=RR9L2OOxgyE Beat
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His name was jose fronted all the cocaine
Till he got bopped in the crib watching soul train
He pled not guilty like no way
He had so many runners he could start a parade
And his price was dirt cheap next to his competition
Word leaked out and and the heat followed in an instant
Joses calm and confident he's outsmarted them before
It's common placement when policemen knocking at his door
Rushed into the back of a cruiser bruised up
Withdrawing from his own supply catching goose bumps
Now were at the station heres how the conversation went
"We heard you stash coke in your basement,
We've also heard about other operations"
Jose knew it's about the X he knows what to expect
So he answers back "I have a lawyer to contact"
His court date arrives he survived doing time
He dished some big fines but bigger fish to fry
Flipping coke hands dry can't even wipe his eyes
Boiling water crack forms and the fiends hit the back board
Jose's so slick what more could you ask for
Rosenberg gottem off six different damn courts
So he needs to keep the peace low key
Overheard some fiends saying some shit obscene
You trying to rob me, Jose replied
They didn't even eye him gavem a ninety nine
Thats a nine to each eyelid no way your alive
So Steve the fiend needs to get his next fix
Goes into Jose's kicks the door in breathless
No time to forget shit he searches and he finds his precious
In a shoe box some soft now he goes to exit
It's all good just a day in the east coast were not heaven
Drop the beat lower than Hell and I can't stress it
Live for your moment Cause jose aint livin
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 9th, '13, 03:56

Lol. It was funny kind of sporadic. I enjoyed it and some of the dialogue. I enjoyed the rhymes at certain points.
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 9th, '13, 04:00

Thanks guy Lol it was very sporadic
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 9th, '13, 04:03

Are you in the creepy carnival collab?
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 9th, '13, 04:04

Yep I'm the crazed shooter
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 9th, '13, 04:05

Cool my next verse will probably be the one for the creepy carnival. I'm doing one on Freddy Krueger.
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 11th, '13, 03:43

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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 13th, '13, 17:37

Last bump then new project
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 13th, '13, 19:35

shadyblogger wrote:Cool my next verse will probably be the one for the creepy carnival. I'm doing one on Freddy Krueger.

dont post the collab just send it to me btw. im gonna post the whole thing together

feed wise, this peice was great i love the rhyming here:

Rushed into the back of a cruiser bruised up
Withdrawing from his own supply catching goose bumps

i liked the idea of this peice, and your rhyming seems like its better and back to normal :happy:
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 15th, '13, 01:24

Thanks guy gonna work on something new hopefully tonight
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Re: 80s Jose

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 03:08

Thanks guy although i love freestyles lol concepts are cool but it keeps my thoughts limited imo
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