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Re: Night Light

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 19th, '13, 00:45

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Re: Night Light

Postby Raul » Dec 19th, '13, 00:48

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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 00:50

Holy shit! I liked the hook and the lyrics were really zany. I liked the confidence and the disses you had though. Not sure if that was a diss towards me or what. But I like that you got balls bro. I can definitely see how Eminem influenced your writing style... At least for this piece in particular. It was pretty dope. :y:
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 00:52

Charlotte Mathers wrote:
shadyblogger wrote:Holy shit! I liked the hook and the lyrics were really zany. I liked the confidence and the disses you had though. Not sure if that was a diss towards me or what. But I like that you got balls bro. I can definitely see how Eminem influenced your writing style... At least for this piece in particular. It was pretty dope. :y:


well aren't you a cute little embase alt :flutter:


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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 00:56

Horsebot3K wrote:
shadyblogger wrote:Holy shit! I liked the hook and the lyrics were really zany. I liked the confidence and the disses you had though. Not sure if that was a diss towards me or what. But I like that you got balls bro. I can definitely see how Eminem influenced your writing style... At least for this piece in particular. It was pretty dope. :y:

Don't worry, I didn't diss you or Rage. It was a namedrop, but not an insult. :y: I appreciate the positive feedback. I like the CW shit I've seen from you, too.

I don't even really hate Silver. He just pissed me off talking shit about my friends the past few days, and happen to be listening to a lot of classic Em disses lately, so one thing led to another and I came up with this little creation.


Lol ok. Thanks.

Yeah I get what you mean. I like the idea of a long diss but I wouldn't know who to diss or how to go about it. But you definitely did it well. Good stuff.
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Re: Night Light

Postby Raul » Dec 19th, '13, 01:01

Horsebot3K wrote:What kind of a schizoid chucks a turd at his own mom?
You shit in a paper towel and hurled it like a smoke bomb
She prays every night, “Lord, a retroactive abortion is all I want”
Regretting letting your dumb daddy bust a nut in her cunt
You'll never be anything other than Adam's faggot cousin
And I think your mother must have smoked about a dozen
Packs of menthols a day during her third term of accidental pregnancy
Please forgive me if these verses droppity dropped your life expectancy
The Horse crew is a family, we’re busy developing a hell of a legacy
Let this be a lesson to any motherfucker who wants to mess with me


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Re: Night Light

Postby Trimss » Dec 19th, '13, 01:03

such zany
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 01:17

Good stuff guy lol I wasn't even sure if u read my stuff

This was a huge piece :o
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:18

Holy shit. Horse I want a talk. Do you have a Skype?
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 01:19

First verse was the best imo
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 01:21

But are you gonna respond?
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 01:23

Yeah that was a pretty creative rhyme: shadyblogger and lady gaga. I like giving feedback regardless of the person I guess
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 01:26

shadyblogger wrote:But are you gonna respond?

Probably when no one expects it but idk about a full out 3 verses I have like no info on him
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:31

Horsebot3K wrote:
IBasicallyRage wrote:Holy shit. Horse I want a talk. Do you have a Skype?

Nah, dude, PM me here.

And just so you know, the line about you was not a diss. It's just that you and Shadyblogger are the only people I've noticed feeding Silver's pieces lately. That's probably an exaggeration and I'm sure there's more than that, but I didn't want to rattle off too many names there. Honestly, I used the line because I noticed that I could make "Shadyblogger" rhyme with "Lady Gaga." :y:

No problem :y: Nice rhyming.

Also the one with pythons name.
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 01:33

Yea it was good I'm horrible at battling tbh id need info as well and im the type to tell everyone everything
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