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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 01:36

Yeah being active in CW sounds like a good idea. I've been more active lately. Keep it up everybody.
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:37

I don't think I'm good enough. Lol I think I have a few verses that are ehh but. Nah I suck.
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:38

Menzo wrote:
IBasicallyRage wrote:I don't think I'm good enough. Lol I think I have a few verses that are ehh but. Nah I suck.

Practice.

Ofcourse :y: I practice a lot. I just don't post anything because of low self confidence.
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 01:39

IBasicallyRage wrote:I don't think I'm good enough. Lol I think I have a few verses that are ehh but. Nah I suck.


Just write and write. You'll only get better, the more you write. Maybe get some emotion fueled into it too and you should write some pretty dope shit.
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 01:40

And I think u should battle geno or spyder tbh

I feel like fucking asher roth and can't make a diss track lol well be a battler
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:40

shadyblogger wrote:
IBasicallyRage wrote:I don't think I'm good enough. Lol I think I have a few verses that are ehh but. Nah I suck.


Just write and write. You'll only get better, the more you write. Maybe get some emotion fueled into it too and you should write some pretty dope shit.

Yeahh. I'll post something soon, maybe.
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 01:42

IBasicallyRage wrote:
shadyblogger wrote:
IBasicallyRage wrote:I don't think I'm good enough. Lol I think I have a few verses that are ehh but. Nah I suck.


Just write and write. You'll only get better, the more you write. Maybe get some emotion fueled into it too and you should write some pretty dope shit.

Yeahh. I'll post something soon, maybe.


Do it
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Re: Night Light

Postby IBasicallyRage » Dec 19th, '13, 01:46

shadyblogger wrote:Do it

Perhaps..
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Re: Night Light

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 19th, '13, 02:01

Bringing someones family in it, like his girlfriend, was low as fuck in my opinion. That's shit off the forum, and it doesn't need to be brought onto the forum. Bugging him, or stuff that's he's brought out like his Cousin or Uncle Mitchy Mitch is fine, but that other shit doesn't sit right with me.

The rest of it was funny, and you write pretty well too.
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Re: Night Light

Postby CanadaPure » Dec 19th, '13, 02:12

Yeah, but I feel like you just pressed it to the next level. I guess I just see it as an overreaction. I'm not trying to defend anything that silver said, but there is some onus on you, in my opinion, to be better than that I guess. Then again, I guess how bad a comment is can be entirely subjective.

I don't want to be completely negative though, I am a fan of diss stuff (usually light-hearted, but whichever), and your writing is much better than I would have expected considering I've never seen anything you wrote.
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Re: Night Light

Postby mdemaz » Dec 19th, '13, 02:28

wow

very diss

much turd
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Re: Night Light

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 19th, '13, 02:45

^That was very nice. That song was like your Cleaning Out My Closet. Now we need a Headlights. No just kidding but seriously I like how you worded that last post.
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Re: Night Light

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 19th, '13, 02:46

whew. this was like cramming 3 bottles of ether down silvers throat at once. but seriously, i feel like all disses aside, this is a good forum lesson in general. good piece, and i look forward to the rest.

BTW, i don't hate you silver :b:
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Re: Night Light

Postby Just Silver » Dec 19th, '13, 02:49

I admit I blew the tournament with a shitty quick idea sorry
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Re: Night Light

Postby sneakerheadshady » Dec 19th, '13, 02:54

Horsebot3K wrote:
sneakerheadshady wrote:whew. this was like cramming 3 bottles of ether down silvers throat at once. but seriously, i feel like all disses aside, this is a good forum lesson in general. good piece, and i look forward to the rest.

BTW, i don't hate you silver :b:

Thanks guys. :y: And yeah, Sneak, I know you don't actually hate Silver. I just wanted to work in some material about the CW contest, lol.

haha i get that i wa sjust letting silver know
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