Mutilate you (mostly a keystyle)

by **ThomasAguanis** » Aug 8th, '05, 04:30

don't fuck with me or make me shout.
because i'll come to your house
rush the door knock you out
throw you on the couch and put my balls in your mouth.
wait untill you wake up and then saw your leg off
hit you in the chest with it just to make you cough
i'll mutilate you because i went crazy
maybe racial discriminate you cause i'm lazy.
and i dont care if your black,white,yellow,red or green
i'll still come after you with a steak knife just to cut out your spleen.
and don't call me mean cause i can be meaner.
fuck it i'll rape your wife with an oscar myer weiner.
but now i come back to you with one leg.
i'll beat the other one off with a bike peg.
then go at you with a glass jar.
break it over your head to leave a scar.
i realize your gonna die,i take you outside and run over you with my car
put you in the trunk and drive you to the river.
drop your body out and i shiver.
i realize i'm not done yet so i cut off your head
i actually did it using a pipe made of lead.
then i get a golf club from my trunk and use your arm as a tee.
say fore and watch your head fly into a tree.
so now theres a decapitated body missing legs too.
but by now i threw you in the river i had enough of you.
so don't fuck with me or i'll mutilate you and your crew
actually i wouldn't do any of this but still i say fuck you

the 1st 4 lines i thought of last week. the rest were new tonight.
it probally sucked but whatever. leave your comments
weather good or bad, i appricate your opinion.

by **shadypelkey** » Aug 10th, '05, 00:45

man I think your were tired cause its shit, no offence, oh wait..I don't give a fuck, don't go kill yourself now

by **ThomasAguanis** » Aug 10th, '05, 01:51

thanks for your opinion. it was the first keystyle i ever did.

by 4D » Aug 10th, '05, 22:16

Don`t thank him for that opinion, Thomas! He`s just bein`an asshole, you`re improving a lot, that verse wasn`t bad at all, Pelkey ain`t no fuckin lyricist!!

by **ThomasAguanis** » Aug 10th, '05, 23:39

thanks FORDIE. i just told myself i'd thank anyone who left an opinion wether good or not and sort of thought that shadypelkey would take my reply as a suprise. i think he just wanted to start a gay online forum fight or something like that.

by **DragonzEdge** » Aug 11th, '05, 21:40

god damn...i havent written any mothafuckin thing cuz of work. i have tons of lyrics on my mind but dont have time to get it down on paper....either cuz i forgot or too tired. right now i forgot....-_-

by **j_shady** » Aug 12th, '05, 08:46

yo your shit is actually pretty good...juss giving a little advice here, alot of people are gonna shit on you and say your shit is wack and all that...but you know youre a dope lyricist if can shit on them harder than they did on you..keep doin what your doin homie