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keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 26th, '13, 14:54

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Had to put out something lol
Any questions at certain stuff just ask :smoking:

Killin em softly as they die in their sleep
They're styles are weak they've got miles to be
In my placement, rhymes hangin prototypes no social life
Over nice when I write I'm just like the son of Christ
Jesus walked over water that I flowed with
Ancient shit handkerchief spit makem sick
Virus of uniqueness spread like weeds and zits
Or at least I want everyone to be creative
Loosen up no suit and tux tense need to adjust
Punch a fruit in his face and then stir up a cup
Jack mixed with the cola black it's hard to match
Sharp as shards of glass don't catch a heartattack
Ill catch your heart and punt it back 100 yard running dash
Love and hate two guns ones empty ones loaded up
Shoot myself with blanks to wake up I use a fake one
I make you duck and take your bread crumbs
Im the head in charge charging past electric cords
Have you slipped on the floor like banana freckles
Im hannibal lecture killing sentences in any measure
A disrespecter with a chance of brandishing the weapon
In front of authorities pourin out the whole piece
Say" no hands look at me "ricochet to a crooked knee
But it's ok if it's the way that it's supposed to be supposedly
Noticeably im the hardest artist controlling my keys
Like a door tumbler activate flows and more comfort
Firm and toned experienced by what's been seen and known
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby shadyblogger » Dec 26th, '13, 18:12

Nice read. Similar to your other stuff but more internal rhyming.
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 26th, '13, 18:16

shadyblogger wrote:Nice read. Similar to your other stuff but more internal rhyming.

Thanks I try to develop my own style
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 28th, '13, 00:11

Bumping :o
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 28th, '13, 16:11

Final bump new project
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Notalius » Dec 28th, '13, 17:02

Just Silver wrote:Final bump new project


When is that mixtape dropping bruh ?
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 28th, '13, 17:03

Whenever I get a Mic and laptop lol
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Eedee » Dec 30th, '13, 08:45

I actually really liked this. You had some dope rhymes, both at the end of bars, and carrying within the bars themselves.
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Re: keystyle pt.3

Postby Just Silver » Dec 30th, '13, 13:52

Thanks guy :y: means a lot especially from an audio person
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