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Couple Poems i wrote about this girl

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Couple Poems i wrote about this girl

Postby SOCIETY » Jul 25th, '06, 08:22

Poem 1 - Untitled

I don't have to be near you to know that your listening to my hearts every word, I don't need to talk to be heard.

These days and nights are filled with thoughts of beautiful highs,
Of the time i will spend forever more with you we'll share our hearts beautiful cries,

With hard times we'll stay strong we will rise,
to a point with no going back and no lies,

No hurtful mistakes, our love it wakes
for many years no fears but joyful tears.

You could live a thousand miles away but you'll always be near
my love for you will never end, im yours forever im here.

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Poem 2 - My Only Love that's holy

There's this girl that has entered my life named Melissa,
There's plenty of times i'd like to say "Girl i'd like to kiss ya",

She's a blue eyed angel with a face that screams beautiful,
A woman of everything loveable, she's worth everything and all that i can give possible.

She's had some horrible boyfriends in the past
but i want to be the one to make everything different i want to make us last

I will always be honest with her and i'll never cheat,
If i cheat it's my own loss it's my own defeat,

What would be the point of ruining something with someone so amazing,
if i screwed up just once to me i'd find it hell raising.

I love her to death and that's all that matters
I will stay with her i'll keep climbing the latters,

I'll climb to where my path of life ends i'll look back and have no regrets,
In sickness and in health till death we've met

When god says ive fulfilled my lives journey i'll thank him for the ride.

Because God's Gift to Me was YOU!
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haha sorry for the mushyness but yeah feedback is cool :8)
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Postby polluted » Jul 25th, '06, 09:22

mushy....
maudlin...though touchin...
i liked it....im smitten with my sugababe 2, pal, so i can relate to wutcha sayin here...

climbing the latters


did u mean 'ladders'??
lol
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Postby SOCIETY » Jul 25th, '06, 09:29

oops shit i always forgot to correct that but yeah that's what i meant.

and thanks
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Postby katastrophe » Jul 25th, '06, 14:45

reminds me of....me :D i always used to write stuff about a certain girl that i liked. nice job homie
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^^^Propz to McMaybe :worship:
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 25th, '06, 16:26

aww datz so cute nice rhymes too....u kno i think a guy writin a song 4 a gurl is 1 of tha nicest things ne1 cud ever do....ya kno its like they spent all dat time thinkin bout u....lmao neways yeah they were real nice :flower:
I LIKE SLIMMY
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