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keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 15th, '14, 02:49

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Rapid heartbeat sober thoughts are rarely haunting
Under the influence living from government benefits
Assorted drugs only an inch away from doin heroin
That may be exaggerated but I wanna live in lavish places
The rap takes me to those through imagination
Hopin out a spaceship lifted like a judge's gavel
Most people want my body frozen dead cement and gravel
Opening my third eye living through the balance
Struggling to survive at this juggling loyalty with sanity
Which one do I plan to keep these drugs are stronger than me
My lungs full of deep green like an interception
Run it back to the same writing zone I've stepped in
Wild like a leopard no style of the pattern invested
Have you dissected shoot a tutor I handle your lesson
This shits simplistic multiple ways I can flip it
Plus I go harder than me and your mother's favorite position
Dope refilled prescriptions of vividness when I spit this
So go with the swiftness never known to be a gimmick
My lines are fiction half real half non existent
I'm such a lyrical menace leave dennis stuck to the fence
If you take offense just get ready and tensed up
Juke the opposition instrumental on some jukebox shit
Two glock shit make the apocalypse look like a little bitch
Dogs are female intercourse for illegal taste
Franklins face for a hooker playmate
Lookin rough like she was hooked to the face
Straight knocked but nothing you'd chase
Wine on the breath sense some cheap grapes
My whole life I've been on thin ice with some cheapskates
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Re: untitled

Postby shadyblogger » Jan 15th, '14, 03:19

Good stuff. I like the intensity and the way the words were packed together. Props.
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Re: untitled

Postby Just Silver » Jan 15th, '14, 03:24

Thanks guy I had to get something out
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Re: untitled

Postby Just Silver » Jan 15th, '14, 20:04

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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby shadyblogger » Jan 16th, '14, 01:00

You changed the title
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 16th, '14, 01:57

shadyblogger wrote:You changed the title

Yep lol
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Francesco » Jan 16th, '14, 14:57

New one & solid yet again... :y: I gotta say you kind of were off duty for a second though.
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 16th, '14, 14:59

Francesco wrote:New one & solid yet again... :y: I gotta say you kind of were off duty for a second though.

True lol I've had writers block :(
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 16th, '14, 22:49

Last bump new project
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Francesco » Jan 17th, '14, 15:11

Just Silver wrote:
Francesco wrote:New one & solid yet again... :y: I gotta say you kind of were off duty for a second though.

True lol I've had writers block :(


Well it didn't last that long though... :y:
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 17th, '14, 18:23

Yea lol hopefully I'll be inspired today

Give me Suggestions lol :y:
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Francesco » Jan 18th, '14, 02:25

Since you touched family members already... get us one about a college chick you want to fuck while recording. lol
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 19th, '14, 03:28

Francesco wrote:Since you touched family members already... get us one about a college chick you want to fuck while recording. lol

I have a gf lol :zipped:
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Francesco » Jan 19th, '14, 12:06

Just Silver wrote:
Francesco wrote:Since you touched family members already... get us one about a college chick you want to fuck while recording. lol

I have a gf lol :zipped:

Do it for the sakes of writing my dude...
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Re: keystyle pt.4

Postby Just Silver » Jan 22nd, '14, 15:45

Last bump new project
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