Hip-Hop Pt.2

by **Francesco** » Jan 19th, '14, 02:18

L.O.F. viewtopic.php?f=24&t=168890

Just a qiuck verse...

Ya fluffy pups like Dizzy & Hip-HOPing SIN
sloppy crap dissin' like SwizZzy is like bowling but not droppin' pins...
(Pause) FUCK Y'ALL...
I'm slappin' Creators
no Future for yappin' trims*
wack imitators
I butcher 'em rappin' MIMS
& bomb Packs & Lil B's
harder than Bush bombed Iraq... the Middle East
I murder turd burglars like Chris Brown
& herb perverts I twist clowns
I heard of nerd 'burbers & put 'em kids down
Man, fuck Bergie & fuck Jerkin'
them New Boyz been cocks working
slurpin' & burpin' when cocks squirtin'
skinny jeanned twats flirtin'
popularazin' butt hurting'
YIKES!

If you didn't get some of the lines... they are as follows about Dizzy, Hopsin, SwizZz, Tyler, Odd Future, Future, Frank Ocean, MIMS, The Pack, Lil B, Chris Brown, ICP, Asher Roth, Mac Miller, Yung Berg, Jerkin' & New Boyz.
* trims as the word... not as Trimss.

by **Just Silver** » Jan 24th, '14, 18:08

I liked the name drops but all of it wasn't necessarily cohesive
Flow was ok not bad short bars helped it

Although I didn't care for the choice of words in certain parts

Like the turd burglar line lol it was still funny though

Overall C

Can't give much advice since its rather short just keep writing :y:

by **Francesco** » Jan 25th, '14, 00:38

Just Silver wrote:I liked the name drops but all of it wasn't necessarily cohesive
Flow was ok not bad short bars helped it
Although I didn't care for the choice of words in certain parts
Like the turd burglar line lol it was still funny though
Overall C
Can't give much advice since its rather short just keep writing

Damn son you gave me a bad grade... lol
I write very very rarely my dude... basically whenever it kind of naturally comes in my head & I'm on the computer to write it down.
If it wasn't for that I don't bother... It's not my thing, really.
Thanks for the feed. :y:

Menzo wrote:Really liked it for the little piece it was, the name dropping/word play was smooth as Hell, dude.
You woulda started beef with more than a dozen people lmao

Thanks my brother... :y:

You're right I would have caught a lotta heat. lol

by **shadyblogger** » Jan 25th, '14, 02:58

Interesting flow and style. I enjoyed it but a bit too short for my taste. Nice though.

by **Francesco** » Jan 25th, '14, 16:04

shadyblogger wrote:Interesting flow and style. I enjoyed it but a bit too short for my taste. Nice though.

I just felt like spitting 16 bars & went for it... plus my last one was too damn long so I had to balance it out. lol

Thanks a lot for what you said & for the feed my dude... :y:

by **Just Silver** » Jan 25th, '14, 16:58

C is a decent grade to me

by **shadyblogger** » Jan 25th, '14, 17:54

Francesco wrote:
shadyblogger wrote:Interesting flow and style. I enjoyed it but a bit too short for my taste. Nice though.

I just felt like spitting 16 bars & went for it... plus my last one was too damn long so I had to balance it out. lol

Thanks a lot for what you said & for the feed my dude...

No problem. It's only natural I reciprocate because you feed my CW posts. :y:

by **Francesco** » Jan 26th, '14, 01:58

Just Silver wrote:C is a decent grade to me

It's all good homie... :y:

shadyblogger wrote:
Francesco wrote:
shadyblogger wrote:Interesting flow and style. I enjoyed it but a bit too short for my taste. Nice though.

I just felt like spitting 16 bars & went for it... plus my last one was too damn long so I had to balance it out. lol
Thanks a lot for what you said & for the feed my dude...

No problem. It's only natural I reciprocate because you feed my CW posts.

Thanks anyway... :y:

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