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Re: EastCoast

Postby Just Silver » May 19th, '14, 15:16

Srry lol just think it's underrated
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Re: EastCoast

Postby Mike Wrecka » May 24th, '14, 14:59

ok cool little flex right here.

you seem to have a good grasp of multis.

the structure was solid. the flow also solid. good stuff here.


would like to see you tackle a more concrete and definitive topic because this was really not that focused but ya it was meant to be like that as a mainly flex piece.
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Re: EastCoast

Postby Just Silver » May 25th, '14, 17:17

Mike Wrecka wrote:ok cool little flex right here.

you seem to have a good grasp of multis.

the structure was solid. the flow also solid. good stuff here.


would like to see you tackle a more concrete and definitive topic because this was really not that focused but ya it was meant to be like that as a mainly flex piece.

ya i have topicals too i just find these to be more fun lol
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Re: EastCoast

Postby Fa-Q » May 28th, '14, 01:10

Those multieeeez though...haha love this silv...you still looking to collab? :wave:
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Re: EastCoast

Postby Just Silver » May 28th, '14, 01:20

Fa-Q wrote:Those multieeeez though...haha love this silv...you still looking to collab? :wave:

Yes
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Re: EastCoast

Postby Just Silver » Jun 8th, '14, 19:22

Last bump since I read this and idk what to think tbh
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