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keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '14, 20:30

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Experimental piece with flow very quick piece trying to exercise my writing muscles

Proceed with no cheating debating life with no weed again
Meaning should I bitch or get on my own feet to win
Temperament similar to the temperatures
Cold hearts in the winter summer blood pressure is high
Stoned as a gargoyle statue in the public's eye
Enough of my life I be tellin them, a hypocrite like Elision
Let's do drugs and complain about others that partake
It's fishy like shark bait nothing correlated
Trying to make more of a statement than recreational drugs
Dealing with plugs that handle the bud
Carefully adjust as im sober
The day is over I say no but can't regain my motions
The same explosions inside a damn soda can
Is how ill blow up with any given chance
Sicker than a driven ambulance
Through a public avenue some will have a few
Chances but me nope picked randomly
To have these chain of events
Draining my spirit feel as big as an ant
Sorry for my plain depression
Impressions that im a suicidal maniac
With no given direction
Emotions grow like a blade of grass
Smoke an eighth of that like I rock Jamaica
Flags staying with my crazy ass you'd be crazy too
Craziness sticks like crazy glue
Same shit insane daily too
Try a new flow just trying to pass through
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Feb 21st, '14, 18:03

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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Feb 22nd, '14, 22:51

Last bump new project
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby DetroitSkills » Feb 23rd, '14, 04:06

really enjoyed the flow on this one, i fuxwitit :y:
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 04:59

Thanks guy I tried a different approach
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 22:46

Truly last bump only get a single piece of feed lol
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Mar 27th, '14, 14:16

Slept on wtf lol :(
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby shadyblogger » Mar 28th, '14, 00:21

Nice experimental flow. Your lyrics were pretty good too
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Re: keystyle.pt X

Postby Just Silver » Mar 28th, '14, 00:23

Thanks guy :y:
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