all of this was a keystyle
here's his last verse
i'm comin' off that crack smokin' shit/
flippin' my click up doing lickety split/
lickety dick up clickety spit shit up/
bringin' intense heat spittin' fuckin' quik/
quittin' my clicka i just fuckin' lit up/
ringa so chinga ya mothafuckin' bitch fuck/
and i felt like responding so heres mine:
oh god...
ill try something like EMINEM..sort of
it ak wick clack dip crack nick nack/
get back, you're shits whack, its trash/
i slash and bash you're ass so fast/
a rash will spread you'll crash, you're dead/
you may stash the lead but i'll still smash your head/
blast the red, past the shed, this is the last you read/
should i say good bye? would i? could i?/
oh my your a ho guy im so fly you're so bi/
go die, go cry, try to flow my lines, they're so high/
you're low i suppossed, am i oppossed to you?/
what arose in you? nothing you suck, go fuck a duck/
get stuck in muck, glock block ill pluck your feathers/
crock you're dethers for heathers wife a lesbo/
you said flow but cant i can you're pants are fem-/
inime, like you with your name eminem, well im better than/
that cause he's fat and im slim no not hi. you got tims?
as in timberlands? what about spinnin rims? or a raido/
you're a lady yo a shady ho, groupie ri=ding a hooptie/
shoot me with a verse, whooptie thee i cursed you/
i'll verse you i bet i win, ill face him and lace him up/
place him up in outerspace, you're sniffing powder flakes/
you powder face, you like to suck on trouser snakes/
wowzers shakes, im done keystyling, which is typing freestyling/
me filing down the disses? you got beter luck trying to drown the fishes/
you're a clown, im vicious and dont care, are you offended?/
will you be defended by yourself? contended by your health?/
surrendered my own self never ill never surrender/
im the top contender you flop ill bend ya/
send ya to hell and back, you fell off track/
im still well on tact while you swell on crack/
oh hell im back on a fire inside, this is your dire demise/
you're crying inside, i know it , try to come back, you'll blow it/
like you blow dick you ho bitch, you're shits wrong/
my shits strong this is a quick song..now lets see you res-pond/

any thoughts?