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You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 04:30

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You just better know how the shit goes those
Foes get What's coming to them if they owe for o's
I suppose the bats got they're knees like flamingos
Grab the keys knocking at the window
I hope it's discreet and the heat stays low
Like the sunset.. by the boulevard city apartments
No gun threats give me the money we can carry onward
Headed to the barber meet you unexpectedly
Gun right next to me silencer whispers rest in peace
Violent want my money or its blood for paper
Destiny for the cells but I'll deal with it later
Red laser playing with these cats
Over fuckin nicklebags
It's the principal financially they didn't hurt me bad
Enough to end it a man to see the cuff like sleeves
Circumstances if they need weed they bought it from me
Comfortably we negotiate ill get what I need
And you'll get what you need
So we be a happy family baggies in the back
With the magazine in the caddy seats
Butterscotch paint but the rims all raggedy
Got it from flipping the bud into Albany
Did It so quickly the cops we're like "how can he.."
High as a balcony taking calls and calling shots
Collecting money from a foreign spot
Respected more than the glock that's directed
In your direction if you tell a cop
So split it and pay me a visit
Or else you be on FaceTime with the fishes
Heard it through the grape vine grape ape is prime
The shits mine gets you so high they users form a line
Mortified by the legal system sober life
It's my only life honestly god owes me it twice
So I'll put the pistol to my head and pray for his advice
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Re: you know how it goes

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 19:46

First bump
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby Trimss » Feb 23rd, '14, 22:47

bumpity bump
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 23:11

Thanks guy
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby DetroitSkills » Feb 23rd, '14, 23:48

enjoyed this,

loved "It's my only life honestly god owes me it twice
So I'll put the pistol to my head and pray for his advice"
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby Just Silver » Feb 23rd, '14, 23:50

Thanks guy :y: I felt there were more quotables in here than my usual
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby Just Silver » Feb 24th, '14, 17:37

Bump
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby SajN » Feb 24th, '14, 18:27

Just Silver wrote:Bump

Bump is something you do after two days or something. Not the fucking same day.
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby Just Silver » Feb 24th, '14, 18:43

SajN wrote:
Just Silver wrote:Bump

Bump is something you do after two days or something. Not the fucking same day.

Its been two days with one piece of feed guy
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Re: You know how it Goes

Postby SajN » Feb 24th, '14, 18:53

Just Silver wrote:
SajN wrote:
Just Silver wrote:Bump

Bump is something you do after two days or something. Not the fucking same day.

Its been two days with one piece of feed guy

Not since your last post in the thread before the bump, but oh well.


I think your piece started out well, with nice rhymes too, but during the middle it kinda fell before picking up again a little bit towards the end.
I've seen better from you :y:
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Re: You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby Just Silver » Feb 24th, '14, 19:07

Thanks guy tbh I understand what your saying with the lack of cw activity the bump system should be adjusted

And ya this piece was meant to have a concept as if a person fronted some weed from me

Tried something different
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Re: You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby Just Silver » Feb 28th, '14, 18:19

And ... last bump then new project
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Re: You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby shadyblogger » Mar 1st, '14, 03:01

I really enjoyed this. Top 3 from you in my opinion. Your words and flow were crazy but really natural. Good stuff man.
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Re: You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby Just Silver » Mar 1st, '14, 03:04

shadyblogger wrote:I really enjoyed this. Top 3 from you in my opinion. Your words and flow were crazy but really natural. Good stuff man.

Thanks guy :y:
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Re: You know how it Goes - plz FEED!

Postby Just Silver » Mar 1st, '14, 03:06

Lmao Thanks for the feed rolly
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