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What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

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What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Mar 28th, '14, 14:05

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So many attributes thoughts flowing as cattles do
When getting milked flows silk don't make me tackle you
Football style American pads fuck soccer cause that shits for the fags
Or the Mexicans. . Jumping over borders pole vaulting
While securities next to them bruised up with bandages
I'm straight cancerous infectious delusional thought
Off of a couple pills and left two in my socks
Who could've thought the smart white kid could be good at this
Apart from all the slight bitching I get from attention
Higher than suspenders over a suspended bridge
As a kid never got a suspension but a Saturday detention
Im back.. I'm relentless tooth decay sweet sentence
Fucked my girl so hard I have a bent dick oh shit
Now I need a chiropractor right away
My dicks so big it's got a brain and a vertebrae
White and out of shape like the pills I take
But at least im great half these writers get hype for nothin
I'll smack a fag with a Snack Pack spoon right in his stomach
Screaming team silver till the shouts from ghosts haunt em
Go hard with a substance in my system
Which should I take the blue one for my symptoms?
Or take some for my pain and such ill even give Pain a bunch
I know he's not into it but come on it's only medicine
Intelligent .. I could tell-a-gent shit makem flop his hands like gelatin
Hip hop is in the hands of this Lithuanian relative
Spit the craziest irrelevant etiquette of an element
Of fire .. fuck the watered down drink it down
Flow that gets passed around your by yourself with no one else
I'll be screaming fuck Eli till I'm senile
And any other fag who talks shit in the meanwhile
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Mar 29th, '14, 14:07

Bump
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Mar 30th, '14, 13:09

Bump the second
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Eedee » Mar 30th, '14, 13:12

I could definitely tell this was a keystyle, that shit be random as fuck homie.

Nah, you had some interesting train of thoughts for sure. Rhyming could've been better, but you had some quick little multis in there that sounded good.
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Mar 30th, '14, 13:18

Thanks guy I appreciate it I surprised myself with this one tbh lol I liked it
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Eedee » Mar 30th, '14, 13:21

Lol you should check out that Unabomber part II I posted recently.
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Mar 30th, '14, 13:23

Def guy feed for feed
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Eedee » Mar 30th, '14, 13:25

I'll also get my 16 in for that collab soon.
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Apr 2nd, '14, 23:12

Final bump next project
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Re: What Silv Does Best Keystyle pt.6 I think

Postby Just Silver » Apr 12th, '14, 05:55

Real last bump also reminded eedee
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