The Improvement

[ShaBruv]

This is the first half of a song I wrote last year to Pretty Lights- A Million Tomorrows

This thread is such named because if you go look at my old posts, i was TERRIBLE but this is decent I think.

Anyway
I'm potentially the best emcee to ever be
Dreams of evergreen, schemes, only 17,
seems like i'll never be, seen with a pedigree
Even though my weaponry, puts in demons into jeapoardy
Secondly, especially I cant bear reality
and my heart can't handle me, my armchair anarchy
Essentially has led me to a farfetched fantasy
it's destiny or meant to be a car crash calamity.
Dealing with insanity, feelings full of agony,
rapping is the plan for me , if not then it's a travesty
Real slow or rapidly, kneel befo' your majesty
Blow the game, know the name then keel over happily
See though my family, swore i coulda gone to yale
But I was mesmerized like every guy by Compton tales
So when i got my main report, tests often failed
With every train of thought i guess im going off the rails
But boy im fine, doing time for some enjoyment im
writing lines, tryna grind the unemployment line
But i've got no regrets except this one I can't forget,
But yet I bet, Im meant to vent this, never get upset
and what the future holds i'll have to ask the hands of time
But this the blueprint yo, a masterclass these plans of mine
So when im super old, bored and tryna stop the feeling
Ill Never say these words, when the lord drop's the ceiling

(A Million tomorrows for one yesterday
that's what i'd gladly trade,
A mountain of sorrows now stand in my way
a mountain i foolishly made)
x2
1:50
Cuz ever since there was evidence of heaven sent intelligence
yes every one was meddling to get me into medicine
But they would they ever let me in,? and any way ive never been
a, denizen,adrenaline i need it in my skeleton
University wont work for me its burning me like first degree,
certainly since birth of me, my purpose something further see,
im worth it, that's a certainty, but my words are cursed with urgency
cuz personally, by thirty three the world must be my nursery.

Okay reading it back it isn't amazing but tell me what you think please!