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Funk Volume

Postby ShaBruv » Apr 6th, '14, 00:40

Yo this is my half finished entry to the DFUOB Contest to the Rikio-Twisted Swing beat

I didn't really feel the beat but just threw together some bars

What is my name you don't know already
Got in this game now nooone is ready
for shredding the mic and ripping the flow
hence i don't write on paper and yo
Just like a hoe man I'm itching to blow
Since i was a kid, wished for this shit
i spit with a mix of venom of blitz,I finna get rich,
Ill give it a go
But let's slow it down
People don't get it or see,
That even Obama care couldnt fix this sickness here for free
So witness a calm emcee, spit with an RPG, cuz arguably
The game's became the lamest RPG, and that is hard for me
To deal with, real shit, i only can see zombies
Insomniacs, though probably that's because they can't sleep on me
and I'm a firing squad and all these rappers are just lining up
Cuz rhymes about the dosh are plain and i don't give a flying fuck
Plus damn yo you can't flow and so im wishing i was Van Gogh
Rather part with my ear than hear the garbage on your tracks bro.
Anyway you're here to hear me rapping tight
I eat dumb emcess, im the empty stomach rapper type...
An alphabet asssassin but I don't deal with the same G's
And everytime i think of lines this cold I get the brainfreeze

Let me know what you think please
I know you want to retaliate but you won't dare,
Cause you fuckin with some ****** like this who just don't care.

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