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Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

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Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 22nd, '14, 19:02

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So I've noticed lately there's no one's thoughts racing
The way that these rhymes stick like it's hot without AC
I'm debating why I'm not the creative king
I need a paper crown and a casket to lay em down
Smoke something like weigh an ounce smash shit
Like the hulk when he pounce buy in bulk and amounts
To flip then bounce with numerous bank accounts
Then stop and think who's against me
All these faggots in the shadows with better histories
Acting like a kid to me you gotta be kidding me
Knock your block off for a kitten fee that's 60 riddled with fleas
Riddled with bullets the pictures I see
My imagery is deep you're on your knees waiting for the peak
The stage for me is dreamy like when you fall asleep
I'm trying to be all me unique
Flow to a beat but I have no foes to compete
So slow like they're frozen in sleet my open sheets compensate
For the drugs grams by weight mass by state high crime rate
High off limes and grapes for the time rate
It moves with a slower pace but I'm straight
Define angst I'm probably that in all shades
This isn't a game makes sense there's no players
People try to change but the life can never get better
Etcetera etcetera you get the message bruh bro
In the tahoe with the side hoe half Navajo
Tribe gottablo smoke tropical in n out the nose
And blow meaning my dick cock what have you
Leaning sorta sleeping but still spitting that spittoon
Spit like a cartoon sharp as harpoons
Or a shark tooth move in silence like some war moves
Faggot......
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby HotDawg » Apr 22nd, '14, 19:16

Nice :)
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 22nd, '14, 19:19

Thanks guy
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 23rd, '14, 18:33

Bump
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 11:48

Another bump bro
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby cement » Apr 24th, '14, 12:47

bumpity bumper
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 13:01

Thanks for the bump
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 16:32

I just need some decent feed lol wtf
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Excita » Apr 24th, '14, 17:32

Record these, so i could hear your flow, man.
Nice that you're writing this much tho, respect for ya bish. :y:
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 17:43

Thanks guy I could do a simple cellphone recording just so u guys know how I flow
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Excita » Apr 24th, '14, 17:48

Would be sick. :y:
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 17:52

excitaz wrote:Would be sick. :y:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0BU8bQzCbYu
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Excita » Apr 24th, '14, 18:21

Just Silver - Fight Music
http://www.vocaroo.com/i/s0wlVZpx3PGU
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one

Postby Just Silver » Apr 24th, '14, 18:24

Lol that was sick
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Re: Mr. FreeVerse vs. no one (audio link included)

Postby Flamez » Apr 24th, '14, 20:25

haha this is nice heard the audio with the fight music beat shit is dope.
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