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keystyle

Postby Enimee » May 19th, '14, 07:16

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Its been a minute since I've written something and finished
So this is for all the words that I have turned into digits
all the problems not listed, bottles and prescriptions
that I have swallowed with persistence. Ill erupt this instant.
Sick of what it is I trust with no limits. A duck that knows fishes
That could fulfill your deepest wishes. Is this your description
Of a life full of wisdom? To me its just a prison
a sea of sand with no land to me it seems terrific
But obvious you don't listen. How could hear above your own thoughts
Thinking you know. But don't know squat.
Bout as good as a beak that won't sqwawk or feet that don't walk
I just got some steam I need to blow off
Don't mind me I'm finally free and won't stop
That's why I key what I key on this old comp
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Re: keystyle

Postby gutawafang » May 19th, '14, 09:31

Yo dawg it's you. You're still here. What up man. It's been a while since we last talked.

Anyways, keystyle was a keystyle indeed. The rhymes are on and off to so it made the flow on and off too. I enjoy the animal references because it's funny.

Hope to see you around more man.
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Re: keystyle

Postby Enimee » May 19th, '14, 15:50

Yeah ill try to start posting more often thanks for the feedback guta always good to hear your opinion
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