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Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 09:30

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Little rusty but fuck it lol

Poppin molly like bubble wrap ,most don't want that
Most just coast by paycheck ,lame sweat
For every rep, in the jail yard I raise a blunt
That's a ton abusing my lungs, just because
I feel sustained, in a stain of abstinent pain
Getting fucked without a dick, like a crotch stitch
Higher than a rocket, most are polly pocket
Plastic fake materials, toys never original
This boys in your stereo, till they say oh
Proceeding oh shit, I'm so focused rolling like locomotives
With a four loko in the middle of the ocean
Part the sea like Moses, discrepancy just bring the roses
I bring the gravestone shit, heaven is the home quick
Home base like you're known to break a fuckin snake
Like metal gear, you ain't ever place a metal here
Im a medal in the air, trying to be a millionaire
Bills ain't fair whether it's a William or a financial description
One was my father who was dead, so he ended up missing
Im just trying to speak, even the blind can pay attention
Especially if my words are sublime like rockstar entrances
I'm all on that endless shit, never quit forever sick
Spit till my lips got dust flying out of em
Killing the whole bout of em out of it but not sounding it
Turn up the wattage, shockem like bad appliances
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Re: Euphoria

Postby mdemaz » Jun 1st, '14, 09:33

Man, this sounds good to a 110 bpm beat.
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Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once

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Re: Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 09:35

Thanks guy I liked it tbh
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Re: Euphoria

Postby mdemaz » Jun 1st, '14, 09:36

Um, I meant 84 bpm, lol...
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Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 09:37

mdemaz wrote:Um, I meant 84 bpm, lol...

I figured lol at first I was like oh shit that's fast
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Re: Euphoria

Postby mdemaz » Jun 1st, '14, 09:39

You know the song Off The Wall?

Something like that...
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Re: Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 09:40

Yea with redman? Or gay Michael Jackson lmao?
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Re: Euphoria

Postby mdemaz » Jun 1st, '14, 09:44

Redman.

Actually, it's 85 bpm rounded off to the nearest number. It's like 84.7 something...

I dunno, I don't care.
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Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 09:51

Thanks for the feed guy
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Postby mdemaz » Jun 1st, '14, 09:58

If you can even call that feed...
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Re: Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 1st, '14, 10:01

I do lmao
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Re: Euphoria

Postby shadyblogger » Jun 2nd, '14, 02:08

Pretty dope imo. It gradually got better and better as the verse went on which was pretty awesome but then the last couple bars sort of fell flat as far as being somewhat dull and I thought the flow kinda fell off. But that's just my opinion. Overall, it was pretty dope. I like some of your one-liners as well. Good stuff brah.
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Re: Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 2nd, '14, 03:24

Thanks guy
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Postby shadyblogger » Jun 2nd, '14, 03:42

Just Silver wrote:Thanks guy


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Re: Euphoria

Postby Just Silver » Jun 3rd, '14, 14:53

Bump
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