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do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby bobthedog » Jul 1st, '14, 15:23

hey guys im afraid that you will judge me when i post this but this is my FIRST rap song well i have been writing them for a while since i knew what a pen was um....yes1! i wrote this one in like 5 minutes because i am beginning to feel like a rap DOG haha geddit?? anyway please do not be mean or harsh becaues this all comes from the heart :'( :wub: :wub: :wub: :flower: i have not written the secon d or thrid verses yet i want to know what u guys think of this first but please no mean feedback thansk!!!! :p :p
p.s. im raeally nervous to post this!
INTRO:)
a lot of people doubt me
i do not know what it is about me
that makes u people doubt me
i think i am going 2 snap
if i do not write tis rap
so here we go!
1-2-3
WEEEE!
(VERS:E1)
helelo ym name is bob!!
i like dogs because they are hot! (that rhymes ok)
and also ur mom (that also rhymes ok)
i got lots of swag!
do not you dare call me a fag!
becaus ei am not a FAg i am BOB.
i f*ck ur mom in her butt so hard it makes her SOB.
everyone syas i am a HEARTTHROB.
more like a HEART ROB
becuas ei rob your heart (get it???_ ;) )
ever since the start
peple said i wasnt smart
but how can this d*ck be wrong?
how can i not sing my song?
also my gas pump is the size of texas
i bet that you wish that you coul d hit this
bt not violently violence is mean
when i said my gas pump i menat my peen (sorry if that is too dirty :o :o )
and when i said you cuold hit it i meant get it
but like suck it
because that is what you do to penises i think
or anyway that is what my older brother told me but he stinks
(brudge:)
he also told me when i was a little doggy
i always used to cry
because whenever i looked at a girl her pussy would just get tight
he said do not ask me why
and i said kk
i didnt mean to have all this swag...
didnt mean to have a d*ck the size of gods (jesus im sporry if that is blasphemy)
but all these female girls just have hot bods!!!
(HOOK)
my d*ck is too big for the pussy to contain
do not ask me why do not ask me why(uh,uh)
my d*ck is too bad for tis world to contain
do not ask me why do not ask me why(uh, uh)
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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby cement » Jul 1st, '14, 15:44

wow this was very artistic
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Postby mdemaz » Jul 1st, '14, 15:46

this is really deep i luv the complex lyricism and wordplay

you are very talented

keep it up bruh
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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby cement » Jul 1st, '14, 15:48

i want to see it rapped on the jay-z "fuckwithmeyouknowigotit" instrumental, please do this bob
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Postby mdemaz » Jul 1st, '14, 15:50

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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby bobthedog » Jul 1st, '14, 17:02

thank you so mcuh for the support everyone!! i was afraid the haters owuld be out to get me but i guess the lovers came instead ;) :p
also cement i lvoe that suggestion i think i will!!! :flower: keep an eye out for it because it is coming!!! :D
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Postby cement » Jul 1st, '14, 17:57

yessssss omg im looking forward to it swagg
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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby bobthedog » Jul 2nd, '14, 03:23

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0sbEantxiF1
listen to this....it is my song :) :) :wave: :flower:
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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby gutawafang » Jul 2nd, '14, 06:29

bobthedog wrote:http://vocaroo.com/i/s0sbEantxiF1
listen to this....it is my song :) :) :wave: :flower:


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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby Rafael » Jul 2nd, '14, 07:12

bobthedog wrote:http://vocaroo.com/i/s0sbEantxiF1
listen to this....it is my song :) :) :wave: :flower:

This is the best thing I've heard in my life .
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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby Rafael » Jul 2nd, '14, 07:18

I thought this guy started out as a gimmick but now I can see he's dead serious about this.

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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby bobthedog » Jul 3rd, '14, 02:37

thanks for all the kind responses :D :D :D :D im glad that you liked it!! :smoking: :smoking:
i am thinking of recording a full lenght album/mixtape i am very passionate about this and was wondering if you guyst hink maybe i could make a living off of this??? i am working on writing the second song....... :boxing: it's called "bob is hard(core)" :smoking: :smoking: bcause i am :8) :p
also it makes me sad that people would think i am joking this is really my passion....i just want to rap and that is all... :wub: :wub:
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Postby Solace » Jul 3rd, '14, 04:44

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Re: do not ask me whhy (my cool rap song)

Postby IBasicallyRage » Jul 3rd, '14, 05:26

Surprised this isn't locked yet
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Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 3rd, '14, 05:28

IBasicallyRage wrote:Surprised this isn't locked yet

bruh, I'm telling you the forum is dying

rules are broken everyday in every section but no one cares anymore lol
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