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Awake Sleeping

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Awake Sleeping

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 22nd, '14, 08:21

I spend my life awake sleeping;/
day dreaming, I stay scheming/
looking for a side job that pays decent/
cuz I got my piloting license,
but don't get hired to fly since... I look Arabian/
so I go to sperm banks to donate semen/
and still barely make enough to break even/
and, now, I'm shooting blanks, so my girl thinks I'm always cheating/
I ain't creeping! I'm on the highway laying cement/
But can't tell her I'm working late evenings/
cuz gotta save any spare change in safe keeping/
and the way she spends/
she'll lose it like she does her hairclips, scrunchies, and safety pins/
life never made any sense/
only time I was cool inside of a school was in front of an AC vent/
was a nerd in AP Chem, who used to hate recess/
Cuz only friend I had was under a fake pretense/
make believing---played pretend/
with my imaginary friend/
who said he'd be there till the very end/
but even he wanted to escape me; said "Have a great weekend!"/
and drowned himself in a lake's deep end/

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Re: Awake Sleeping

Postby shadyblogger » Jul 22nd, '14, 08:22

Nice piece brah as far as the rhyming and whole flow. Keep it up.
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Re: Awake Sleeping

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 22nd, '14, 22:05

Blogs McGooch wrote:Nice piece brah as far as the rhyming and whole flow. Keep it up.


Thanks, man. I'll post more as long as I'm being recognized. This site, at least the CW section, seems pretty dead though.
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