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Death Row

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 23rd, '14, 08:20

lof: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=172600

My last meal, I requested some breakfast cereal/
'Dulce de Leche' Cheerios/
lethal injection just felt like meth and heroine/
I got high off it--the executioner was met with my deadpan stare/
hope he brought an extra pair/
of underwear cuz he shit himself so bad he suffered a rectal tear/
they tried to kill me with the electric chair/
(is this really necessary?)
they were horrified cuz it worked like a defibrillator,/
made me feel more alive before experiencing system failure.../
I stood up unaffected like I neglect to care/
just went to the nearest mirror and checked my hair/
hangman's noose felt like a breath of fresh air/
I've had erections to worse during my many sex affairs/
with s&m belts around my neck to wear/
"Get me the direct line to the governor's secretary!"/
Don't you know? The only way to kill me is to eject my stereo/
or disconnect the deck from my record player?!/
...damn
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Re: Death Row

Postby shadyblogger » Jul 23rd, '14, 17:30

Nice lyrics and rhymes as usual!
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Re: Death Row

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 24th, '14, 01:13

Blogs McGooch wrote:Nice lyrics and rhymes as usual!


Thanks for the consistent feedback! Really appreciate it.
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Re: Death Row

Postby Snakebeast » Jul 24th, '14, 01:29

Wheeeeeeew that was some awesome stuff. Would love to hear this stuff recorded over a beat.

My favourite lines:

lethal injection just felt like meth and heroine/
I got high off it--the executioner was met with my deadpan stare/
hope he brought an extra pair/
of underwear cuz he shit himself so bad he suffered a rectal tear/


Amazing rhymes, great imagery. Last two lines I found quite funny.

just went to the nearest mirror and checked my hair/
hangman's noose felt like a breath of fresh air/
I've had erections to worse during my many sex affairs/
with s&m belts around my neck to wear


Once again, great rhymes. The second line is probably my favourite in the entire piece.

Overall, I honestly have no choice but to give this a 10/10. Absolutely fantastic. Wish it was longer.
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Re: Death Row

Postby shadyblogger » Jul 24th, '14, 04:37

EvryOnesACrtc wrote:
Blogs McGooch wrote:Nice lyrics and rhymes as usual!


Thanks for the consistent feedback! Really appreciate it.


No problem breh :y:
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Re: Death Row

Postby gutawafang » Jul 24th, '14, 08:06

Very visual. Loved it. :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Death Row

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Jul 24th, '14, 23:46

Snakebeast wrote:Wheeeeeeew that was some awesome stuff. Would love to hear this stuff recorded over a beat.

My favourite lines:

lethal injection just felt like meth and heroine/
I got high off it--the executioner was met with my deadpan stare/
hope he brought an extra pair/
of underwear cuz he shit himself so bad he suffered a rectal tear/


Amazing rhymes, great imagery. Last two lines I found quite funny.

just went to the nearest mirror and checked my hair/
hangman's noose felt like a breath of fresh air/
I've had erections to worse during my many sex affairs/
with s&m belts around my neck to wear


Once again, great rhymes. The second line is probably my favourite in the entire piece.

Overall, I honestly have no choice but to give this a 10/10. Absolutely fantastic. Wish it was longer.


Haha wow, thanks. That was flattering. For anyone that liked this piece, check out my other drop I just posted a few days back called 'Awake Sleeping': viewtopic.php?f=24&t=172575
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