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Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Aug 5th, '14, 17:38

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I pray to God everyday yet he never answers
Bet he hopes I end up dead or suffer from some cancer
Satan was my father, feeling always awkward
Doing all these drugs just to get my mind off it
Religion is a lie that is rumored through the streets
I try to live in peace but this money is eternity
Burnin trees, just to get higher than a low life
So I can respect myself just to live my whole life
But it's all a lie, currency controls the world
Silver spoons fed to these faggots that don't know the worth
It's so absurd, poor until I'm living earth
Worms eat my body , god never came to church
So I'm fucking sitting here while my whole soul burns
Suicide was a first choice, cried until I lost my voice
Where is my direction, so misdirected
I would die in a second if it wasn't my girlfriend
When the world ends, I wanna be high as shit
Just to show God that he never ever gave a shit
I was born into a pity party, with no guest list
I guess this life really isn't what I predicted
No college, less knowledge from the brain damage
Draining four loko cans till I fuckin stay standard
I mean I'm really a nice guy butI've been stranded
Like an island, no damn direction behind it
I need god in my life yet all I see is violence
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Aug 6th, '14, 14:27

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Re: Is god real

Postby shadyblogger » Aug 6th, '14, 20:08

Good little piece. Had a few nice emotional lines but others seemed pretty filler and weren't that moving. Keep writing.
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Aug 6th, '14, 21:19

Thanks guy
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Aug 8th, '14, 13:01

Last bump new project
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Aug 11th, '14, 15:13

Bump till feed
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 02:21

Last bump new project
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Re: Is god real

Postby shadyblogger » Sep 4th, '14, 02:22

Just Silver wrote:Last bump new project


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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 02:24

Will u please feed
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Re: Is god real

Postby shadyblogger » Sep 4th, '14, 02:25

I fed already tho
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Re: Is god real

Postby yung rom » Sep 4th, '14, 03:12

Just Silver wrote:Currency controls the world
Silver spoons fed to these faggots that don't know the worth

Just Silvet wrote:god never came to church

dopest lines
Charlotte wrote:Talk about cringe please, check your own posts in ANY thread.
Charlotte wrote:yung rom living up to his sig
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Re: Is god real

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 03:16

Thanks guy
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Re: Is god real

Postby Solace » Sep 4th, '14, 04:05

Burnin trees, just to get higher than a low life

nice
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Re: Is god real

Postby Halftongue Dre » Sep 4th, '14, 04:53

Read your bible brother. Its the only way to understand who God is. Keep writing too yo. Nice honesty just being yourself..
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Re: Is god real

Postby Minimii » Sep 16th, '14, 02:19

Halftongue Dre wrote:Read your bible brother. Its the only way to understand who God is. Keep writing too yo. Nice honesty just being yourself..

shut the fuck up this isnt argument area place
give feed and gtfo
god doesnt exist
Cause you'll never take my pride from me
It'll have to be bribed from me"
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