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Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 11th, '14, 14:59

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This that random anthem, talking about killing shit
Never had a gun but I type like I'm registered
Hit a bitch with a clip over the register,unforgettable
Yet ill never be depicted, it's so pitiful that the witnesses are with me
Pull out all dirty like Sanchez, got the damn bread tanish sedan shit
Faster than a whirlwind im out the premises
24 more hours and I'm on my way to prison
But I won't know, got a safehouse so low shits nuke proof
Got 2 22s in the living room looking like mature adults
Im more for cash and skulls,royalty and all
Trying to live like there's oil in my heart, rich as fuck
Mister tux but my life was a sitting duck
Never got out the sand much never did stand tough
But you bet I will in this fuckin verse go absurd absorb the acid
You're the church pastor while im purchasing assorted backwoods
Im not just that good, I'm frosted flake great puttin a bowl over your face
Milkin your profits till your hoe come in late then I await and rape
And bust just like blackjack all in her ass crack
Im a cracker ass pop you like corn put you in a butter bath
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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 11th, '14, 16:03

Hesky wrote:It's evident that you're adjusting to writing whilst sober just from reading this. You'll get there eventually, my man. I remember Wax mentioning on his podcast that he struggled to write whilst sober, so it may be a common thing.

Thanks guy lol

I still think there were some good lines
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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 12th, '14, 16:19

Bump
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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 13th, '14, 13:05

Last bump new project
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Re: Random anthem

Postby mdemaz » Aug 13th, '14, 13:29

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Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once

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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 13th, '14, 14:04

Hell ya thanks guy lol

Did u make the beat
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Re: Random anthem

Postby mdemaz » Aug 13th, '14, 14:14

Yeah.
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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 13th, '14, 14:17

Good shit just need to change up the flow near the end
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Re: Random anthem

Postby Just Silver » Aug 24th, '14, 01:29

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