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Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Aug 20th, '14, 18:04

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You want warfare I make it not fair
So many drugs don't know how I got here
My top hat and my tux fits comfortable
You wanna fuckin roll? Well let's go
Pop the molly like deadmaus listeners
Dead rats from the feds they be dealing with
I'm Brock Lesnar with the pen
You better start listening again and again
Strong wordplay your verbs on the bench
Verbose come back in a trench coat
With so much dope I'd kill a couple antelopes
You're an ant at most, im stomping your hill
Fillin it with gas as I swallow a pill
Im too real, to be fucking with generics
Run this shit like Jerome bettis
I'm known to get it, rhyming in my genetics
While this generation is never getting better
Etcetera I'm sick check the temperature
Fuck the thermometer I'm thorough
The commoners congregate in their boroughs
My bombs annihilate any fellow
You fell below, my L filled with smoke as I toke
The hero without the spandex no logo
Your man's next I'm with the piece like a Lego
Jump out the bushes like a motherfuckin psycho
My sights go, straight above your eyebrows
Im high now so I think it's time for lights out
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Aug 21st, '14, 16:11

Bump
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '14, 03:18

Last bump then tourny
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Aug 22nd, '14, 21:44

Last bump new project
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Sep 2nd, '14, 04:49

Very last bump new project
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby hasseb432 » Nov 20th, '14, 06:57

Reminded me of one of my own pieces

Didn't care for the acronym breakdown but it wasn't too bad
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '14, 13:32

Thanks guy this was one of my shittier pieces in most aspects lol
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Atone » Nov 24th, '14, 01:06

nothing to amazing about this, it flowed kinda awkward and kind of messed with my brain
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Just Silver » Nov 24th, '14, 01:21

Yea this was a quick little piece I wonder what I was on lol
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Re: Fuck it off the top

Postby Dewey Decimal » Dec 4th, '14, 02:16

With so much dope I'd kill a couple antelopes
You're an ant at most, im stomping your hill
Fillin it with gas as I swallow a pill


best part hah
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