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Re: newborn killer

Postby Supershade » Aug 29th, '14, 01:53

I needed drugs so I raped Jesus
Bent him over and taped three sticks
To his nuts to create a fake penis
Cause I can’t explain to y’all how dang exhausted my legs felt, just having to balance my dang self but on eggshells I was made to walk but thank you, ma, ‘cause that gave me the strength to cause Shady-mania
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Re: newborn killer

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Aug 29th, '14, 03:53

Horse wrote:inb4 silver's next piece is about raping jesus


Don't encourage him... :shakehead:
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

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Re: newborn killer

Postby TranSlucEnt » Sep 2nd, '14, 04:46

Little too disturbing for my tastes, but good job none the less! Some lines didn't connect very well, but for the most part it went together nicely. It's a learning process, ya know?

But good job m8 :y:
"Soon as my flow starts, I compose art like the ghost of Mozart"

"All that fire in your eyes shows pain, but the flame ain't blue enough"

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Re: newborn killer

Postby Just Silver » Sep 2nd, '14, 04:48

Thanks guy

This was inspired from a comment I made about killing a baby for money and I just went with it lol
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