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Mathew My Half brother

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 03:00

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The only one related to me that I truly respect
Some call it my half brother but I just call him by Mat
My mother left out the "T" and the other father
He grew up with his grandparents I was far behind him
My dad died when I was one I wish I stood beside him
But I didn't, due to my mother's addiction
Going through the government's system since I was little
He grew up on his father's side , yet my only father died
Wishing for the best but if he only knew My own cries
Maybe he'd feel different, he was given the Silver spoon
I was fed with moldy food on spoons with heroin residue
I love him to death, yet I only see him on holidays
And Christmas is the only day , fake smiles then he goes away
He has a career ahead of him, god bless him for that
All I got ahead of me is this drug death trap
He goes back to the big city to Sirius radio
Yet my life is so serious I'll never live that scenario
I wanna show my pain, yet I should man up
But it's tough , when you've never had a real man to tell you toughen up
He's in his early thirties traveling the whole world
I'm in my early twenties already feeling I'm burnt
Straight to hell, no guidance was given barely any supervision
I need to cheat the system, only way of existence
I wonder if he still even loves me, since I know he's making real money
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Re: Mathew

Postby Supershade » Sep 4th, '14, 03:02

Most of this doesn't even rhyme
Cause I can’t explain to y’all how dang exhausted my legs felt, just having to balance my dang self but on eggshells I was made to walk but thank you, ma, ‘cause that gave me the strength to cause Shady-mania
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Re: Mathew

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 03:07

Internally it does look it over lol
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Re: Mathew

Postby Just Silver » Sep 4th, '14, 03:24

Supershade wrote:Most of this doesn't even rhyme

Definitely at least slant rhymes

U may have to flow it differently
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby Halftongue Dre » Sep 6th, '14, 01:06

Just Silver wrote:My dad died when I was one I wish I stood beside him
But I didn't, due to my mother's addiction
Going through the government's system since I was little


Dope yo..
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby Just Silver » Sep 7th, '14, 18:35

Thanks guy
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby Dewey Decimal » Sep 7th, '14, 22:22

Lol nice shit silver , venting leads to real raps
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby shadyblogger » Sep 7th, '14, 22:23

Dope shit brah. I really dug the flow and your style on this one. Nice work
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby Just Silver » Sep 9th, '14, 16:14

Thanks guy
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Re: Mathew My Half brother

Postby Littliepuppys713 » Oct 20th, '14, 02:24

:smoking: deep shit :coffee:
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