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pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Sep 26th, '14, 20:08

Fu*k TR and all those f*ggots against me
We used to be cool until they started the bannings
 First ban about quad posting, like really
This grizzly haired bi*ch from Alaska named Eedee
The next ban was all because of sensitivity
I'm just having a laugh at the twin towers
Made a couple Arab jabs so the mods have power
Now they think they ruined my internet fun
For at least until the 24th , I'm feeling no remorse
Sorry about beating a dead horse, it just gets to me yes indeed
I'm blessed with weed,because without that or a forum
I'd take all my anger out and grab some warrants
Grab a sword that's enormous and swing till dead like McCormick
At least here there's less foreign f*ggots
Thinking Europe is so great sipping on tea packets
Take another lump of sugar , fairy sweet hookers
Trying to take advantage of me, maybe this place is for me
Since mentally everyone prior was an internet geek

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Straight Satan sitting on satin sheets
Plotting plans from pot leafs kick it like a lotta feet
Picture devil horns, coming through the fu*king street
Embers from my rhymes, third degree burns when the verse returns
Reversed and heard, the devil speech which is me
I go harder than concrete, sing my song sheets devils army
Blood and guts in the palm of me, higher than Palm trees
Bluegrass like farming, mixed up strains ,bluedreamin through my days
Maybe pick the haze, and roll it in a backwood 
If it ain't a backwood it ain't that good
Paint the black hoods red in enemy innards
Remain a sinner boiling up you're gonna simmer
Down to the ground make a happy worms dinner
Im happy Gilmore with the club gonna hit ya
300 yards and im only a boxden beginner
High as a center, off moss crispy kief like the winter
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby shadyblogger » Sep 26th, '14, 20:10

Holy shit! That was incredibly dope man. You were channeling some really cool shit on this piece. That was really cool to read.
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby DetroitSkills » Sep 26th, '14, 20:41

i actually really enjoyed this haha, fuck yea dude
MMLP2 11.5.13
#teamEncore #teamEllenPage
"Enough rhymes to maybe try to help get some people through tough times
But I gotta keep a few punchlines just in case cause even you unsigned
Rappers are hungry looking at me like it's lunch time"
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Sep 27th, '14, 14:52

Thanks guy one more hiatus piece to go lol
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Oct 4th, '14, 00:54

First and last bump then new project
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Oct 8th, '14, 03:17

Last bump new project
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby shadyblogger » Oct 8th, '14, 03:42

Just Silver wrote:First and last bump then new project


Lol
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby CasperJ » Oct 10th, '14, 20:46

it was ok, I feel like whoever you are, your status made these people project love for you
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Oct 10th, '14, 22:21

CasperJ wrote:it was ok, I feel like whoever you are, your status made these people project love for you

Thanks guy

Yea these were just two random pieces while I was away

Also if u didn't know my ban situation it wouldn't make sense
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby runSA » Oct 11th, '14, 01:37

Like the rhyming and I like the raw intensity of your thoughts
"This world is mine for the taking, make me king as we move toward a new world order"
-Eminem
RIP TR 2005-2014
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Re: pt.1 hiatus

Postby Just Silver » Oct 11th, '14, 01:54

Thanks guy
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