The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

sleep deprived keystyle by anonymous

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

sleep deprived keystyle by anonymous

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 2nd, '06, 16:19

sleep deprived im strugglen to survive
im sure i wont make it pass the 3day mark alive
my eyes are closen and my fingers are dead
cant hold my head up straight looking back insted of ahead
gotta stop the madness from da spread
its consimen me quick.. i dont wanan belive it "its all in my head"
these midgets tug'n at my pant legs are all lies
fabrications of my ill minded impatients
something not so new it feels acient
im tierd of the same old tricks
tired of all this i wanna go out for drink
but im in no possition to possition myself in such dangerous position
im so wacked out atm that im rhymen the same word
that was my third time usen it and i feel like a nerd
know how to use this word proper fuck im lost
got lost in the fubble n toss
i cant even remember how to spell correctly
but it dont matter as long as i deliver these hits directly
telling it to ur face even if my brains in outter space
this being that care i hate u ur a fucking disgrace
i wish i could embrace my split personalitys not just have them erased
ashes in a vase and all this brings be back to the base
were i started the chase for first place...

edit:
if you didn't know already by the title...I didn't write this
Last edited by ThomasAguanis on Aug 2nd, '06, 16:39, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
ThomasAguanis
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5857
Joined: Jun 22nd, '05, 22:14
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male

Postby rhiannon » Aug 2nd, '06, 16:21

lamo i liked it...specially tha midgets tugged at ur pants lmao nice work an some nice rhymes :smoking:
I LIKE SLIMMY
User avatar
rhiannon
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 6006
Joined: Jan 25th, '06, 17:20
Location: uk

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 3rd, '06, 03:38

Sarah wrote:That's pretty good. Tell the person who wrote it that they did well ;)


im sure they'll see this

and yes it was good to the person who wrote it
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

Image
User avatar
ThomasAguanis
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5857
Joined: Jun 22nd, '05, 22:14
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male

Postby ThomasAguanis » Aug 3rd, '06, 03:58

Sarah wrote:Damnit! We ever gonna find out who it is? :flutter:


all depends on if they say it themselves...i told them i wouldnt say who it was so im not going to. sorry :flower:
B.K.A. The King of Kale A.K.A. The Superfood Sensai
I still rap better than you.

Image
User avatar
ThomasAguanis
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5857
Joined: Jun 22nd, '05, 22:14
Location: New Jersey
Gender: Male

Postby polluted » Aug 3rd, '06, 09:33

I am now an official hoe....I suck dick for money for my pimpys - Maybe and Killa



is this sposed to be construed as a sort of a joke?
polluted
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 942
Joined: Jan 31st, '06, 08:02
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users